So, almost there... · 5:10am Oct 25th, 2019
Well, my next chapter is looking to be a pretty long one. I'm almost done, just have another scene to write involving U.S. Rangers running counter-abduction activities. However, I would like a critical eye for the things I have written, so if you've got the time, could you guys be my wingponies? That would be awesome...
You can find the unfinished chapter here: What I Am: Chapter XXXVII
Looking good. I hope Alex is hacking the Krin ships. Give them a taste of their own medicine. Also might want to check up on when to salute foreign leaders, I am 30 years out of date, and was never in a position to worry about it.
I'm a few chapters behind so i'm afraid my input would be an uneducated guess, but I plan on coming back to this awesome story eventually.