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Knight Breeze


Just your average gaming geek/college student. I study computer science, play pathfinder, and write stories, and have a patreon!

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  • 50 weeks
    Xlibris

    Hey, you guys ever hear of Xlibris? I've got an offer from them to publish my book, but I'm getting some shady vibes from some of the reviews I've read about them. Any thoughts?

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  • 51 weeks
    Amazon's changing it's print costs.

    So, as of June 20th, Amazon will be changing its print costs. Specifically, everything is going to be a bit more expensive. If you were on the fence for buying a physical copy of my books, now's the time to change your mind, seeing as how the price is going to increase in a couple of months. Thought I'd give you all the heads up.

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    14 comments · 317 views
  • 52 weeks
    What I Am: Aftermath chapter.

    Hey, guys, I'm writing a conclusion chapter for What I Am. Nothing too substantial, given that a sequel and spin off already exist, but I thought I'd put it down as both a way to let those that don't exactly follow me (or, at the very least, don't follow my blog) know that the second book is out, and also know that A Darkened Sky is about to get a whole lot of chapters.

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  • 53 weeks
    Fool's Gambit.

    Man, did you ever go back and just... cringe at what you did before? That happened to me with Fool's Gambit. The story has plenty of potential, that's not the problem. My problem is with how it's written. The prose is off, there are numerous errors, and I feel like the whole thing is rushed. Like, that first part could have easily been 4-5 chapters longer, and it would have been better for

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  • 53 weeks
    Live on Google Play!

    Hey, guys, just wanted you to know that What I've Become and Nightmare of the Past is now live on Google Play! So, if you didn't have a kindle-compatible device before, you can buy both books for 3.99 each right now on Google Play! I'll be working to get them into more outlets during the next couple of days, so keep an eye out for them!

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Oct
25th
2019

So, almost there... · 5:10am Oct 25th, 2019

Well, my next chapter is looking to be a pretty long one. I'm almost done, just have another scene to write involving U.S. Rangers running counter-abduction activities. However, I would like a critical eye for the things I have written, so if you've got the time, could you guys be my wingponies? That would be awesome...

You can find the unfinished chapter here: What I Am: Chapter XXXVII

Report Knight Breeze · 496 views · Story: What I Am · #u.s. rangers #hfy #afy #go army!
Comments ( 2 )

Looking good. I hope Alex is hacking the Krin ships. Give them a taste of their own medicine. Also might want to check up on when to salute foreign leaders, I am 30 years out of date, and was never in a position to worry about it.

I'm a few chapters behind so i'm afraid my input would be an uneducated guess, but I plan on coming back to this awesome story eventually. :twilightsmile:

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