MotH Chapter might have been a bit early · 3:26am Sep 27th, 2019
So after some consideration from comments and my "pain in the ass" editor*, I have decided to unpublish the latest chapter and write a new one to happen before it.
*his words not mine.
I noticed something was a touch off. Had to go back last chapter to see if I missed something.
Too late, already read it. can't wait to read why it all happened!!!
I don't think it needs much. Schadenfreude was their/her last resort, right? Just give us a few paragraphs of their increasing desperation and other options they tried.
Saw it coming, but yeah. It did seem like it kinda jumped from doctor I have this... problem, to... DOCTOR I'M DYING, in 10 sentences flat. But I still can't wait to hear about velvet seeing twilight.
I still need to catch up
I might just be stupid but what is MotH?
Edit: Oh. It says so in the thing, never mind. (Thought this was from another author, not you.)
It gives a nice backstory for why Blitz is going through all this trouble. If anything including Starlight was filler, not the gathering of queens. So many characters and so little time...
Aww I missed it...
Drat.was looking forward to to reading that
Seems I was to slow to read it