AoS Chapter 11 draft now complete!

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So after being stuck for ages, I finally threw out the entire section that was sub-par. Once I had let that go, and had a conversation with the creator of Tempest (my daughter) the writing was able to proceed. Took me about four weeks. Now that this draft is done, I will comb over it to refine it and smooth it out before giving it to my pre-readers... which will be available for them I'm projecting this weekend, probably on Friday. After they are through, and final edits are made, we'll go to publish.

Pre-readers still welcome, as long as they don't mind leaving criticisms and comment on potential problems. I need that. Okay, tally-ho!

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[Babroniedad]

Woo hoo!