Okay, Chapter 16 is done except for a pass through by my team · 9:00pm Feb 24th, 2022
Meet Narcisse Pavo... We'll see how he's doing soon.
As far as my Blog title "...pass through by my team." Uh, that was tic. Don't really have one of those.😁
I have finished the chapter, but I do want some feedback before I pull the trigger on it. Any volunteers, give me a PM. In the meantime, I am working on chapter 17. As things continue to ramp up... 😈
My biggest contributor, Seriff Pilcrow, says he'll get to it next week at some point. He's a busy guy, and is also working on a chapter of his own, but if he can get to that at some point, I'm penciling in a release for next weekend - around March 4-6 or so.
As far as Celestia giving some background for y'all - I think the scene will be enjoyable and well worth it. There are several fun reveals and twists along the way. If anyone else is up for a read through to give me a few objective (or subjective, either way!) opinions on what needs clarifying or re-workng, just drop me a PM.
Looking forward to getting this ship back out on the water again, and next chapter incoming as well! In the meantime, here is the last remaining page of AoS as a comic. Not sure if my daughter will ever take up that project again, but it was great fun while we combined efforts on it.
Also found the following video very interesting... Just imagine walking around in -62 degrees Celsius weather... oof.
Umm... Not sure if it was intended or not, but the comic image you posted only shows up the size of a postage stamp. Even clicking on it doesn't make it bigger, and opening it in another tab makes it smaller.
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Oof. Need to fix that. Call me a tech-noob
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There. Made it a lil bigger...
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Yep, now its readable!