Four vilianesses VS Dusk Shine Update · 1:01am Sep 5th, 2019
So the story aspect on 4FvDS is done... as in... the dialogue, the story itself and including the final chapter along with epilogue.
The clop is still what keeps me from publishing it and that is it. So ideas..... ?
Help? Pitch ins? anything?
I can't do the clop, but I have an idea of where to go, just can write it it all out.
Chrysalis and Silhouette are the ones that are left. I need those done to close out this series.
I need help on how to use Chrysalis's Drones as part of the scene.
I need help on how to use Silhouette's...…….. Crystals? Nightmares? Dark Magic? ….. The FCK!!!! am I supposed to do with her. Anyways, plz help in order to complete this story before the year ends and I can be happy.
Mmm maybe it's time to give some power back to our boi dusk
after all the more powerful the vilianess the more prone to be dominated
I'll take another look at the Chrysalis chapter tomorrow. I apologize if I've been a negligent editor.
Chrysalis's drones: They could dominate with a 'changeling supremacy' angle. Bonus points: bukkake etc, use the slime
Crystals: Perfect to grow over the body to use for bondage or as a kind of exoskeleton, allowing her to control his body
Dark magic (NMM): Sensory deprivation at least?
I’m not sure how this would work it into your story since you already have the dialogue done, but here are my suggestions
Take advantage of the fact that changelings are shapeshifters. Have the changelings transform into Dusks friends; either participating or act as cheerleaders.
As for Silhouette’s crystals, nightmares, and dark magic. Why use one, why not use all three? Use the crystals to try and tempt Dusk with riches, use them as binding for BDSM, and wearing then as piercings or accentuating points in erotic clothing and lingerie. Try to tempt him with knowledge of dark magic. Then when that all fails, use nightmares to try and break his spirit and have the nightmare be something that ends up endearing Silhouette’s to him. We all know that's how this is going to end anyway.
In fact, let’s go back to Chrysalis and look at the temptation angle. Having the drones changing to Dusk's friends and have Chrysalis offer them to him, but he refuses since he doesn’t want his friends he wants his “girlfriends”.