New Chapter and New Edits

Hello all,

It has been one week since I've left my previous job as a correctional officer. I suppose that this is too early to panic over joblessness, but I hope that I'll be able to find something soon. Wish me luck!

In other news, I've published another chapter of Ponyville Noire, Volume Two: Kriegspiel. I'm glad for the support that this story has received, and I hope that you're all enjoying it!

Also, in response to some criticism, and my own self-critique, I've done some minor edits of Ponyville Noire, Volume One. As follows:

• Case Four, Chapter Ten: retconned Phillip not knowing that Flash was Joyful Sound's son. I realized that there was no way he wouldn't have known that and fixed the dialogue indicating such.
• Case Three, Chapter Four: slightly retconned the Family's origins, making them into thieves and spies for hire.
• Case Three, Chapter Ten and Case Four, Chapters Two, Four, Six, Seven and Nine: added dialogue and other details to try to make it clearer what Phoenix House's scam involved. This was a tricky case, and I realized that I kind of failed to adequately explain what was going on. Hopefully, this makes it clearer what the plan was. (Also, I'm claiming Artistic License Law)

There may be more edits: my friend Seriff Pilcrow, the author of Daring Did (which you should go read right now) is doing an official review of the story, and there might be other issues that need to be addressed. I do my best to make my stories the best quality I can make them, and that means correcting any mistakes. If you notice any grammar errors, plotholes, or just anything that doesn't make sense in my stories, please don't be afraid to speak up!

That'll do for now. See you next week when I post the next chapter!

Josiah