There was a Ninja, some woman with green hair named Gertrude, probably my sister Vengeance, and Lord Skywalker. You know. The one that likes to snorkle.) colabed on a story! Technically past last-minuted addition to latest chapter. · 10:28pm Jan 14th, 2019
Caught a comment from Nova which was inspired by a suggestion from Steel Resolve AFTER I published. I had to go back and expand on a scene. For all those who got on that Mother of Midnight train super early, here's the addition:
“Please-have-dinner-with-us-tonight!” Twilight Velvet blurted out.
“Well, I mean, there’s still that hole—”
“After dinner!” Twilight Velvet said quickly. “We’ll come right back, I promise!”
"Yeah! Portals can wait!” Night Light shouted from the rolled-down, driver’s side window of a silver sedan. “Our daughter needs friends that aren’t for legged!"
“HONEY!” Twilight Velvet hissed. “Don’t say stuff like that out loud! We TALKED about this!”
“We did!” Night Light confirmed. “I just didn’t agree to anything.”
“Hey! At least I can talk now!” Spike cried indignantly.
“That’s the spirit!” Night Light replied. “Never give up! Also… What?!”
Sunset’s forehead tighten. “Why is it always the talking dog that gets people?”
Midnight let out a very audible growl. "See! I can socialize with Spike, he may still be a dog, but, technically—"
"Technically, your father is still right.” Twilight Velvet cried. “Get in the car!"
“Yes! Sweet validation!” Night Light exclaimed.
“But, mom! I can just fly or maybe rip open a portal to our living room-”
Twilight Velvet grit her teeth. “Get. In. The. CAR! NOW!”
Midnight flinched. "Yes'm,” she answered as she opened one of the back doors. “Move over, Spike… I’ve got a lot of feathers composed out of sheer anguish to get back there…”
Twilight Velvet turned back and gave Sunset a nervous smile. “Sorry you had to see that… Are you still up for dinner now?”
“Of course!” Daydream replied cheerfully. “I’d love to!” Sunset answered before turning to Applejack and giving her a double-thumbs up.
Twilight Velvet giggled to herself and practically began to skip back to the car. “She said she’d love to…”
four legged
But even more hilarious!
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Thanks! Fixed!
Yey.
Mother shipping her daughter and her arch nemesis... I approve.