The Lawyer and The Unicorn M-rated version reviewed...

By Mind’s Eye of the Pleasant Commentators Review Group, unrequested by me:

Review of The Lawyer and the Unicorn *Mature*

TL,DR; It was rated somewhat grudgingly as Enjoyable as the reviewer had not read the Turnabout Storm novelization (only seen the videos) before coming into TLaTU and thus found a lot of stuff confusing, other things unenjoyable. I responded in the comments.

I'll have more to say later, after I've finished off the next Nightmare Night chapter as I don't need distractions from that right now, and I also need some time to digest and think about the review. But for now, let it be known I am planning to give TLaTU a large-scale editing pass after I'm done with the one for TAS and will incorporate some of the review’s feedback when I do so.