A Fixed Derring-Do

I had pumped out a half-baked A.K. Yearling and the Derring-Do. I've received very helpful feedback which signaled to me that it was very half-baked. To make sure it was presentable enough, I overrode the writing schedule and fixed it up. Now, it should flow a lot smoother now.

Thanks to FanOfMostEverything, Dante_Vail_1911, and Ri2!