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Gambit Prawn


Here, I've found a couple of stories I had always been searching for. I hope to provide the same to at least one other person.

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  • 67 weeks
    Short-hopefully not vain-update

    Hi.

    My schedule has slipped more than normal, chaotic as it already is. I partially psyched myself out with the big reunion between Diane and Aron/Alice. There's so much to potentially cover that I'm worried I'll miss something. I considered writing an intermediary chapter from Alibi's perspective, but that felt overly constraining to attempt.

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  • 141 weeks
    Next Update

    The next chapter is ready to go shortly.

    As a consequence of personal growth I now have all of the bad habits and none of the excuses for the timetable. What I can say is that I've been looking forward to writing some of the upcoming scenes for years. This is a strange thing I do—that I still don't believe when I explain it to myself. Thank you all who are crazy enough to stick with me!

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  • 155 weeks
    Vanity Blog: 3

    I'll cut to the case for this one. After all, you don't not read this blog to hear self-deprecating rambling.

    For the first point, I had intended a camp for the foals for quite a long time. The adults' activities was just a bonus gag.

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  • 156 weeks
    Vanity Blog: 2

    If I had the energy to write, I would be forging ahead. I've cleared a lot of my mental obstacles, but hard work is still just that. Anyway, let's see if I can make anything of this director's cut. I feel like there should be a generic term for the sort of content that content creators put out to tread water, whereas all their followers have gathered because of a particular type of content that

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  • 158 weeks
    Vanity Blog: 1

    So I've got my piece of a crumb of a grain of a drop of internet "fame" and I want to milk it for all it's worth. As far as blogging goes, I think there's only one real selling point: I won't make any demands. No Patreon to shill, no begging for subscriptions, follows what have you.

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Aug
21st
2018

Update 8/20 · 2:23am Aug 21st, 2018

Next chapter is in the editing stage.

As expected, three-hundred words a day is still challenging after a long workday :ajsleepy:

So while I'm sorry I couldn't keep that pace, I hope to deliver something of good quality.

I'm also weighing how much to reveal with the stinger. Do you guys prefer I be straightforward, or do you like to connect the dots in the comments? Let me know :pinkiesmile:

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Comments ( 3 )

I like the ability to figure things out, but not too subtle please! It works better (in my humble opinion) if you name-drop most of it, but don't have the characters figure it out immediately.

You don't need to spoon feed us, but don't go to such lengths where readers need to sit down and have intense discussion to figure out where the story is going. A single reader should be able to figure it out if they're paying attention.

Whatever you reveal, I'm fine so long as it's delivered naturally. And hopefully the stinger is decent and/or pulled off successfully, since I don't see that happen all that often in fan-fiction.

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