May
25th
2018
Dawn of the 2nd Day · 4:55am May 25th, 2018
A little better. But even I'm annoyed with myself how I tried to make the princesses so "Right".....ahh well, it's nearly over, we're almost to book 2.
CrazedLaughter
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The Princesses are so smart, they can uncover the future timelines! Joking.
Though some stories make it like that, atleast you kept it to where they have so much knowledge that they can just spring it onto someone and completely mind fuck them. Though, I'd think they wouldn't understand Anon since he's human but eh. Usually it's all about friendship.
I just don't really see the Princess as the manipulative type, or atleast Celestia... Luna maybe.
But even then, with what happened and how you needed to quickly change things, I understand why you did it this way, and I have no right to complain about it, the story progressed greatly in my eyes and that's what I'm glad for, it didn't get cancelled, it didn't get randomly deleted for no others to see, it continued on until the end point which is why I adore you're motivation!
Seriously man, Book 2 which I feel will be the greatest. I get the feeling that you will NOT disappoint with Book 2 and I just can't wait as this Book 1 get a closer to the end.
Yes, it's annoying the Princesses are always made to be the most intelligent or the most brightest, or some unholy amount of intelligent. But damn, a fake wizard was able to fix The Crystal Heart when Celestia or Luna couldn't come up with any solution as to fix it, even with ther3 advanced knowledge. Damn, even Starswirl was smarter then the Princesses, he created spells, did unholy things and he's just an old ass unicorn.
I'm not trying to grill you Crazed, you're doing great... I'm just pointing these things out for the people who criticize you for not doing it right or some dumb fucking shit like that. It's your own story which comes with your own ideas, not theirs.
Oh, Celestia is ages old, she can see the future, she has the strongest walls against emotions. Wrong, not everyone can gaurd there emotions no matter how old and strong, sure... she can move the sun, but that doesn't make her a God, nor Luna. Everyone, or everypony has a flaw no matter how grave.
Seriously, I need to chill with this rage hehe, I love the book Crazed and I just can't stop saying it. To be honest, I read your book more then 5 times already, it's addicting and amazingly thought of. You're very smart man, and I can't wait for those future updates. <3
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I'll be more mindful for Book 2, since I'll be writing it without the need to compete. I need to get everything right, especially with the princesses. At least it isn't like the story I was mainly competing with (the one where the other Anon is from). That story went to literally make Celestia's school into a KND/Recess hybrid.
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Oh good Lord, that doesn't sound entertaining at all. Competition sucks, for every thing that you do, there will always be a competition. It's annoying, I mean sure it challenges you to upstage them during the battle but it's just to much work for just something like that.
I'm guessing with what you meant by KND is Kids Next Door? Cause if so... then no can do, too much tech for the little pones. I never really understood KND, I found Invader Zim to be more entertaining. But that's just my opinion, I just don't see how writing something off of said show is a smart thing to do.
But I could be catching that meaning of KND wrong or right, hopefully I'm right. If not then shoot my robotic lenses I call eyes. Hah.
Just don't stress yourself to hard, sure... there are needs of changes, but not everything can be perfect. Last I wanna see, is you draining you're motivation in a day with half a chapter because you couldn't come up with absolute perfection. Reminds me of Twilight for some reason... Lesson Zero I believe? I forgot. I haven't seen the MLP episodes in a while.
But yea, back to the point, I'd had to see you drain yourself. Take the time, and then eventually summarize on how they should be, with a little reading or show viewing. But, I shouldn't be telling you how to do the story, it is you're own... I just can't help but point out some things, sorry.
But even then Crazed, I wish you best of luck man. And I hope that you can get whatever bothers you out of the way so you can start refreshed and cleaned. No need to stress all the time Don'tcha know. Hehe... sorry.
But yea, good work Crazed, entertaining as always, even the small conversations on here with you lighten the midnight mood of mine, thanks!
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you are indeed correct, Kids Next Door. And don't worry about my energy, there may be some days where I don't update, but until i announce something, it just means I couldn't get to it. But, just the same. I'll be able to write at my leisure and use the new developments in the shows to make some cute slice of life and some great adventure moments. Hell, that's what the movie chapters were all about mostly, a bit of a mental exercise (I still need to get those two last chapters out tho)
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Yes, I was right... pat my back.
Been waiting on the movie chapters for awhile, I just thought that you were so busy on Book 1 that you simply didn't have the time, but... of course I was wrong.
Sure you have a daily upload schedule, atleast from what I see... But, everything staying at your own pace is all the better. It will keeps things flowing smoothly and you'll be able to notice and fix any mistakes made during development.
Though, now I really can't wait for the cute moments, always loved them.
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when it comes to the movie chapters, you're right. I have to go through and reread and edit some of Book 1 so much i lost the time to do the movie chapters. That's why I'm waiting til Book 1 is fully over with, then I do the movie chapters, then i upload the after years chapters, then finally...Book 2
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Lots of work on your plate there, ever thought of getting someone you know for some help? Bah, you probably already did.
But yea, busy little schedule you got there, but don't rush rush it, sure getting the end of Book 1 is absolutely needed. But don't rush it, I know you said I shouldn't worry about your energy or any of that, but it's all about staying in the flow you know? It's radical in a way.
But what I do know that is once you finish with all of that, there will be such a relief you'll feel, and hopefully you do, you're doing great and I really do congratulate you on that, even clapped my hands in happiness for it all. Out of every other Book, yours is truly the most I have enjoyed.
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thank you, i feel great hearing that
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