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ScarFox9700


I'm just your average Brony. I love trains, I love history, I love writing stories, and I really, really love wolves! But most of all, I love writing my stories here for your enjoyment!

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Apr
16th
2018

Why I do what I do · 10:29am Apr 16th, 2018

Hello Everypony, ScarFox9700 Here.

This blog entry may be considered VERY controversial, but this is something that I HAVE to get out there! The truth is, the "Zebra Domination Universe", aka, those stories about Zebras taking over Equestria, and trying to breed Ponies out of existence, DISGUSTS, and absolutely SICKENS me to NO END!!!!

These stories make me want to PUKE!!!!! I have NEVER read more vile, filthy, disgusting, sickening, HORRENDOUS works of writing in my entire LIFE!!! For the sake of this entry, there are 2 stories in particular that I'm calling out. "The Zebra Conspiracy", and "Kwa Rusha". And let me just get this out there right now, I mean absolutely NO disrespect to the authors of EITHER of these stories. It's not THEM, it's their story's CONTENT!

Yes, I KNOW that it's meant to be porn, AND that it's made for the whole "Cuckholding" business, but yet, whatever happened to porn with taste? Have any of you ever read the "EXPLICIT!!!!!!" Chapters of "Battleship Express", and "Beyond the Express"? Remember how fun, interesting, and erotic they were? Leopard, and the mare(s) that he was with in those chapters, GENUINELY loved each other! They did it because it was consensual, and they were both enjoying themselves. There were NO drugs! NO rape! No non-consensual ANYTHING!!!!

However, with these stories, all of that vanishes. Now, there's no love, no consent, and only ONE party's really enjoying it if you think about it. The Zebras use drugs, peer pressure, and other methods of "Persuasion", to get the mares, and stallions, to do what they want. It's so vile and disgusting.

I also find this universe VERY confusing. Remember the REAL cannon show MLP FIM? Well, in all honesty, I really do wonder if ANY of these authors have ever even WATCHED the show! Remember how these Zebra stories start? The Zebras show up, and start to infiltrate slowly. Remember that episode where Zecora showed up in Ponyville? EVERYPONY was TERRIFIED of her, and she was just ONE Zebra! Now imagine if you will, a whole GROUP of Zebras just showing up out of the blue. Nopony knows where they came from, nopony knows what they're doing there. Now, these Zebra stories will have you believe that the Ponies would just "Love and Tolerate" them, all while letting them do what they want. That would NEVER fly in the show! There would be MASS panic, screaming, running, and possibly even rioting!

Also, whenever the Zebras start doing things that are seen as "weird", or "not normal", why the heck is NOPONY EVER suspicious?! NOPONY EVER questions ANYTHING that the Zebras do, EVER!!!!! It's INSANITY!!!!! And Twilight? OH, don't even get me STARTED about Twilight! She's often the one LEADING the way to Pony extinction! Apparently, "Princess of Friendship", means, "Don't question anything, do whatever you're told, repeat!" It does NOT make any sense when compared to the Twilight of the show! She would NEVER act like this!

And here's the part of my rant where my anger boils over. The Ponies NEVER even stand so much as a GHOST of a chance in these stories! Never ONCE does ANYPONY even so much as TRY to fight back! The Zebras win without even TRYING!!!!! The stallions are weak little PUSSIES, and the mares are unquestioning nymphos!

Remember the old "Fall of Equestria" Universe? Even THAT was better than this! At least there, there ARE stories of Ponies fighting back, and they're canon in that universe! And even when the Caribou won, it was a long, and costly war! Here, the Zebras never even so much as suffer a broken fingernail! This is PATHETIC at BEST!!!!

I've had NIGHTMARES from reading some of this Zebra Domination stuff! What if it was OUR world that the Zebras were doing this to?! What then?! Would all of YOU just roll over, give them your wives, sisters, mothers, girlfriends, female cousins, female friends, and just go willingly towards your own extinction without even so much as a weak voice of protest? The EXTINCTION of HUMANITY?!?!?! Or would be a REAL Man, (or Real Woman!) stand up on your own Gosh-damn feet, pull yourselves up by your own pants, and actually DO something about it?! Actually FIGHT BACK!!!!! Humanity fought the "Conversion Bureau", we fought Xenolestia, We fought MANY other things, SO WHY DON'T WE FIGHT THIS MONSTROSITY!?!?!?!

And what I mean by this is, why is MY story, "Battleship Express", the ONLY story on ALL of FIMFiction that's an "Anti-Zebra Dom Story?!?!?! I've seen PLENTY of other comments from Ponies who are just as DISGUSTED with this WRETCHED universe as I am! But yet, "Battleship Express" still stands alone as the one bright star in a universe of darkness.

Now, my sadness kicks in. Why would the Ponies just let this happen to them? Why? Why won't ANYONE answer their internal pleas for help? THIS is why I do what I do. THIS is the entire reason that "Battleship Express" came into existence in the first place! I got so SICK AND TIRED of both "Fall of Equestria", and ESPECIALLY "Zebra Domination", that I just HAD to write a story where the Zebras were SLAUGHTERED for what they were trying to do to Equestria! I mean sure, the Caribou got theirs too, but if you read the story VERY carefully, you can see that my hatred for the Zebras is SO much higher than my hatred for the Caribou. Why is this? Well, what do you think?

However, HOW do I show this in the story? Well, the answer is quite simple. Remember the Caribou? Many of them surrendered, and as I revealed later on in "Beyond the Express", most of them went back to living their daily lives under Equestrian rule. Sure, SOME were executed for war crimes, but others simply received lengthy prison sentences. The Zebras? NO! THEY were almost wholly EXTERMINATED!!!! THEY got nuked into oblivion! I said that there were fewer than 300 Zebras taken prisoner, and almost ALL of them were female! They got WIPED OUT in my story! And Overlord Zakia? Well, HE originally came from "Kwa Rusha". I borrowed the name, changed a few details, had him get paid back in kind for his actions, before being executed in "Beyond the Express".

In my timeline, he, and the rest of his disgusting race, FRIED for trying to invade, and conquer Equestria! Humanity showed them what happens to those who try and take away freedom, and try to rape, and enslave. Never again will the Zebras, or the Caribou, rise to cause any more trouble for Equestria.

And this is also where my mind begins to kick into gear to get my imagination working. What if I wrote more stories of Zebras getting slaughtered? The truth is, I have some ideas, and ALL of them involve Humanity coming in and kicking ass, or the Ponies saying, "You know what? We can see through your bullshit lies, GET OUT!!!!" "What? No!" The Zebras say, "Equestria is OURS now!" "Fine then, we'll MAKE YOU LEAVE!!!!!" Either way, The Zebras lose, and get their asses HANDED to them!

However, at the end of this, you all may be asking yourself, "Am I taking this too seriously?" "Am I losing my mind over fictional stories?" Maybe yes, maybe not. Sure, I don't WANT to read that garbage, but yet, where else would my inspiration for counter stories come from? However, each new chapter is WORSE than the one before it, and these stories are plunging straight to hell from the get-go. Like I stated earlier, the Ponies NEVER stand a chance, and NEVER lift a finger to fight back. Their world is lost before the stories even begin.

You can call me crazy, sick, or deluded all you want, but I will NEVER stop hating this universe. Someday, I REALLY hope that at least one of you takes my rant to heart, and follows the tracks that I laid out to write an "anti-Zebra Dom story of their own! I can't do this alone people and Ponies! "Fall of Equestria" came to an end recently, so why can this one? I'd be happy if even ONE of you wrote a counter story. And even if no other authors take up my challenge, I'll never stop writing. I'll never stop hating, and Zebras will NEVER stop being slaughtered for the crimes that they committed in this universe!

Above all though, I'd REALLY like to hear your guys's thoughts on not only my rant, but also the "Zebra-Dom Universe". If you like it, I don't hate you, and we can have a civil conversation about it. If you hate it like I do, I'd like to hear why as well. Also, Somepony PLEASE take up my challenge, and write the SECOND "Anti-Zebradom" story!

(And now that I have all of this off my chest, I feel SO much better! It's now out there, being read by all of you, and it's not all trapped in my head. The world keeps moving, and I with it. Oh well, I guess it's back to the "Battleship Express" Universe for me! Bye now!)

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Comments ( 20 )

Personally I've never read a FoE or zebraDom story. I've read a few stories like "A wolf among Carribu (don't know how that shits spelled.) But never a Zebra Dom story. But damn if u don't make it sound really bad, and the story mentioned above is really dickish in it's portrayal of the carribu.

Hello ShadowLight96,

And FoE, I can handle. But trust me, you do not EVER want to read a Zebra Dom story! NO self-respecting person would! I stumbled across it by accident, and now I SEVERELY regret it!

And yes, my description above is MORE than accurate, and I even think that it’s an UNDERSTATEMENT!

I hate the ENTIRE Zebra Dom universe and EVERYTHING that it stands for! And Like I said above, it really saddens me that I seem to stand alone against this universe with “Battleship Express.” Why can’t there be other “Anti-Zebra Dom” stories?

I have seen both of these universes on Google images and I hate Zebra Dom universes then Fall of Equestria because of a few reasons. One, the zebras basically turn petty much all mares in to whores with a potion and use them to barth they children while the caribous just to rape them senseless. But mostly two, your right, they do (basically) bring them to extinction because I saw one of those images that they one of the pony stallions in to a mares, sore the caribous do the same but they only do it is they break a law. And one more thing say hello to one of my imaginary grandson.

Hello there. I maybe the some as the caribous and those zebras, BUT I DON'T DON'T ENSLAVE OF REAL ONES! One of these days, I will can to that one of those Zebra Domination universes and send those basterds to a place I created which is way wrost then you think, THE HOLY HELL. That's also where some of the creepy posta creatures I hunted down. This was The Human Demon, the Creepy Posta's Nightmare and Sex Doctor.

Like I said imaginary grandson who's not as good as many other of my imaginary family, but good non the least. Note: add at least one word to make sore you get what you won't hope you know what I mean. Another note: my imaginary family which you don't care I suspect have more than one title with strange and/or unique porpoise, the first however is what they are.

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Hello crossoverfandragon,

And at least I'm not the only one who hates the Zebras, which means there's still hope!

(Also, and I'm DEFINITELY not trying to be rude, but your spelling and grammar REALLY could use some work! I had difficulty reading this, as well as trying decipher what you were trying to say. Again, no disrespect, but please work in it for the future!)

Well that was a Long Blog.

I mean absolutely NO disrespect to the authors of EITHER of these stories. It's not THEM, it's their story's CONTENT!

I really do wonder if ANY of these authors have ever even WATCHED the show!

They have.

Kink-shaming is not nice.

Revenge fantasy porn can be just as mindless and shallow as any clop.

If you set out from the standpoint of wanting to destroy things people enjoy... then I don't think a civil conversation is possible. I dislike Zebradom stories, but I don't want them to end. It sounds like that's what YOU want.

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Hello The Great Derpsby,

and yes, like I said, it's not the AUTHORS, it's merely the CONTENT that I have an issue with! I don't like the stories, ok? That's why I put this HERE, on my OWN page, instead of a comment section somewhere. This is just an angry rant by myself to vent off some steam against this DESPICABLE universe.

And I'm NOT shaming the kinks, I'm just going after the illogical "logic", and plot holes that these stories have. I took them, and pulled them apart, and then said WHY I don't like them.

Honestly, I don't give a flying Frisbee to what people like and don't like, this is just MY opinion! I said what I said, ranted a bit, voiced my disgust, and then left the floor open for discussion.

However, if you don't like that I don't like it, I really don't know what to say. I've learned in Life that "you can't please everyone", and I mean no disrespect to anypony, their opinions, or what they like, I enjoy reading and writing stories where the enemies of the Ponies get taken down a few notches, be it by Humanity, ot others. Nothing more, nothing less.

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However, if you don't like that I don't like it, I really don't know what to say. I've learned in Life that "you can't please everyone", and I mean no disrespect to anypony, their opinions, or what they like, I enjoy reading and writing stories where the enemies of the Ponies get taken down a few notches, be it by Humanity, ot others. Nothing more, nothing less.

It's not that. It's how your post sounded kind of giddy that Fall of Equestria recently died, and how you looked forward to Zebradom stories also dying, and how people should work towards that. How does that fit with the parts where you say you don't mind what people like?

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Honestly, I can't think of anything else to say.

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Perhaps I came on too strongly. Sorry about that. Let me try to clarify.

I do get you. I don't like Zebradom stories. Neither to I like bloody revenge trips. But I've always, always wanted to encourage folks to write. I feel bad when writers stop because of, say, pressure. I've seen it happen. Writing revenge porn to regular porn you personally find icky is okay. More power to you. It's when something like this pops up:

I can't do this alone people and Ponies! "Fall of Equestria" came to an end recently, so why can this one?

That I become wary.

Just... keep in mind this is all supposed to be fun for people, okay? I've seen actual efforts to destroy parts of the fandom by self-proclaimed moral guardians. It was ugly.

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Yeah, it makes sense now. And, as I stated in what I wrote, this was just a long rant. I just typed, and didn't really put too much deep thought into what I was writing. I just wanted to get it out there, but yeah, maybe I should have thought it through better. You live and learn I guess. Note to self: Be more careful about what you try and stomp on in the future.

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Thank you for being so understanding.

I agree that these stories are not my cup of tea. Although i disapprove of sending your viewers to attack these stories. I know it wasn't on purpose. However, maybe you should write an apology blog. You have EVERY right to be mad but that DOES NOT give you permission to do this. AS a powerful writer, you could influence the wrong course of action. After all, you don't know if anyone on this site could possibly be suicidal and do you really want to be the one to push them off the edge?

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Hello Sanguine Blade,

and in reality, I was NOT sending anyone out to attack anything. This was just a muddled rant that I went on one night just to get everything off my chest. I was just venting anger and frustration, and I was half asleep while I did so. Later on, I began to realize that people MIGHT take this the wrong way, and I began to explain this to some who commented the same way that you did. I've thought about deleting, or tweaking this, but yet, I don't know what to do with it. But no, I do not want to push anyone over the edge, or cause any trouble really. I was mad, I ranted, and I later came to my senses.

Once the dust from this settled, I sat down, and in the course of about 2 weeks, I put "Fear From the Rails" together instead. I channeled my anger and frustrations into that story instead, before moving on, at least for the time being. I have more anti-Zebra stories planned, but they're further down the pipeline.

I've also apologized to those who said that they were offended by this, and I explained the whole situation.

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Alright. Just know lad. Its best to talk about your angers to those who respect you. It is best for you and others to not publicly denounce someone's work. I have derpression and you know what i do with my anger and sadness...i make art. I use it to craft stories,poetry and other things. Take the ugliness and channel it into art. Lest you bottle it up and become like i was

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I know, and it wasn't THEM or their work specifically that I was calling out, it was the genre, and I was just using those 2 stories, as they had the best examples of what I was trying to point out. I specifically said that I meant ABSOLUTELY NO disrespect to them, but yet, looking back, I still see that I went at it all wrong.

And I'll take that advice for the future. Like I said before, I decided to channel my anger and frustrations into writing, and from that, I hammered out "Fear From the Rails", with a few more similar stories planned down the pipeline as well.

NEVER AGAIN will I go off on a rant like this, and if I hate something, I'll just write a story about it, and target parts of the genre that I hate, and NOT do this!

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good on ye. Also when will your next series occur? I just know it will be excellent. Or the tale of MAdam queen. Its ashame her and her younger siblings the 5011 class are also not in service. All of them and te queen are reduced to static display. Damn AMTRAK refuses to help the queen since they own the raillines she could use

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The next stories invloving Zebras dying won't be for a while yet. I just have too much ahead of them. My highest priority right now is finishing up "Beyond the Express", which I hope to have done by mid-June. My net story, "A Track Too Far!" aka the story with Madam Queen in it, has the first 4 chapters written, with Chapter 5 in the works, though I won't post it until after "Beyond the Express is finished. With what time I have, I have to take this one step at a time.

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And yeah, screw Amtrak. They seem to HATE these historic trains for whatever reason, such as SP Daylight 4449. Thank God for the Union Pacific Railroad. They not only run their own trains on their own tracks, but they also have the UP 844 running, and the Challenger 3985 will run again once her firebox has been replaced sometime in the mid 2020's. And the Big Boy 4014 is almost ready to run again too, so there's that! Union Pacific is the BEST when it comes to historic trains, restoring them, and operating them! THEY love trains, and they are the largest railroad in the US, so it's really too bad that THEY couldn't save the Madam Queen, even though she's a Santa Fe engine, not a Union Pacific one.

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