Better late than never 'Beard with the Jerk' additions. · 5:40am Dec 5th, 2017
Tired Old Man has been a bit busy as of late but finally got around to looking at the latest chapter of my epic Star Swirl is an epic douche tale! His comments resulted in a coupe late additions that I thought were pretty humorous. Rather than force any readers to reread the whole thing to find them, I've added them below. Enjoy!
“Oh…right…” Twilight said, releasing Sunburst enough that he could start catching up on all the precious oxygen denied him over the last few minutes. Twilight let out a heavy sigh. “So, let me guess. If you’re not after hugs, then you’re also going to tell me I should stop working with Star Swirl.”
“No,” Starlight said, “I think you should disintegrate him or at least cast a sleep spell on him so we can take turns doodling on his face.” Starlight frowned slightly. "Though, it's not like anypony can draw a phallus big enough to eclipse our canvas in that case.
“I’m not going to just slug the legendary Star Swirl the Bearded!”
“Come on!" Starlight insisted. "He's smacked you with his hat and hoof a few times! You can at least ring his bells a little... You know... with violence."
"Yes, Starlight, I got that." Twilight shook her head. "I'm not interested in hurting Starswirl, alright?"
But Twilight should hurt him! She's a dang princess! She can't let anypony walk all over her!
Twilight I know your the princess of friendship, who believes that things can be solved with talking and compromise buuuuuuut that does not mean you can't let him belittle.At least in case him in a bubble