Hey, guys! Sorry that this took so long, but...

The next chapter is ready, and waiting for my prereaders to go over it with a fine-toothed comb!

There is a reason this one took me so long, though.

It is babies. Babies babies babies.

Anyway, if you want to take a look at it, you can find it here.

I'm sure that I'm missing something, but for now, I have to go to bed. I have work tonight, and I'm already late for bed as it is. Toodles!

Comments

[stephen51991]

[Yanitur]

This chapter settles it, I can't help but read Yavaar's lines in the voice of Jed Rees as Teb in galaxy quest.

[lordelliott]

I can't stand to read it with the state it's in from trolling. I'll just wait until you publish.

[Lycanthromancer]

4741217 Skip to the midway point. I copy/pasted from there and did my edits on the pasted portion.

You can tell 'cuz it's green.

[Topaz Moon]

4741217
Yeah it is unfortunate that some dipshit did that.

[Knight Breeze]

4741454 4741288 4741217 Well, you guys don't have to worry about it anymore, because I just finished editing the chapter. It's already ready to look at!

I also added a few things that I thought clarified a few things. So even if you've read it before, go ahead and take another look!

[lordelliott]

4741288
It was purple on my screen, just so you know. Purple on white was just too much given that I was already tired from editing a different thing, but now I can just read the finished product, so the system works.

[Lycanthromancer]

4741849 Either one of our screens is messed up, or one of us might be colorblind, because I most definitely colored everything green.

That, or it's been recolored by someone who wasn't me.

[lordelliott]

4741851
I think Google Drive assigns everyone a color randomly (might be different on your end) and any edits are shown in that color, even if you try to change font color.