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MetalJrock


Just a guy writing stories, mainly crossovers.

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    What Goes on in My Head

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Nov
21st
2017

Sonic Forces: RiM Ch. 5 preview · 10:45pm Nov 21st, 2017

I wanted the next chapter of RiM to be up today, but a few days ago I decided to rework it based off some concept art so it'll be a bit. So I decided to show a little change to Green Hill that should've been in the game.

Here's a preview of Arsenal Pyramid to show what I mean. Unedited btw.


It was a cloudy night in Green Hill. Sonic, Rainbow Dash and Buddy ran down the best path they could find to avoid any detection. The sector of Green Hill they were in looked to be a camp, surrounded by fences, survelliance lights and the like. In the distance was a pyramid, their destination.

"Yeesh. Green Hill's lookin' a lot sandier since I was last here. And fortified." Sonic muttered, noticing the sand drying up the grass. In fact he could spot more sand in the distance instead of the usual lush green. He, Rainbow Dash, and Buddy ran along the path in hopes of reaching the weapons factory soon. But to see this made his skin crawl, "Yep. This has Eggman written all over it all right."

"Ugh. I hate sand." Rarity gagged, "It's rough and coarse..."

Silver interrupted, "I don't think we need a lecture, Rarity. We get the idea probably."

Buddy sighed. He had heard of this place before. To see it fall under harsh circumstances was quite disheartening. He saw the sand, barbed wire, and metal barriers keeping back most people. He saw cages with actual people in them. His eyes widened, wondering just how bad things got here over the months.

"Are those... People?" Rainbow muttered.

Sonic relunctantly nodded, his eyes facing the saddened gazes of the captured people, "Yeah... Egghead must be grabbin' them for his twisted roboticization schtick. I thought he dropped that long ago." he murmured in disgust.

"Sonic?" the hedgehog heard a voice call out to him. The three stopped, facing a lone dog sitting in a cage, "Y-You're back? And w-who are these two?"

The blue blur gave a thumbs up and said, "Yep. Eggman can't keep me still for long. These guys are Buddy and Rainbow Dash, good friends of mine." he knelt down, "Trust me, we're gonna trash this little camp Eggman formed. I'm not gonna let any single one of you get turned into a robot."

The dog shook his head, "It wasn't Eggman that made it."

Comments ( 7 )

by all means, add on to the story! Forces Story sadly isnt that great, and to see much more added is all the better! Maybe you can explain the Phantom Ruby protoypes

This is pretty good. Is the cage taken from the concept art?

Time to kick Somber off his flank! Team Sonic to the rescue.

4731646 The game kinda went into detail about it already, but I'll try to expand on it.

4731696 Yep. I don't know why they stuck with sand instead of that.

4731697 Time to bring down the Eggman Empire one piece at a time!

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not really. All I got outta it was Eggman just made the prototypes... and thats it. Dont know why he made them, Perhaps Ill have to resit through the story, but still, not alot of details went into the story

4731709
Oh yeah as what Sonic would say (a Jason Griffith voiced line), "Alright! Lets do this!"

Hmmm... if it wasn't Eggman than was it Infinite?

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