Small changes · 12:03am Jun 4th, 2017
Greetings everyone.
I just wanted to inform you that after receiving some feedback and talking with my proof-readers, we came to conclusion that Chapter 1 part 1 would serve a much better role as a prologue, while prologue is better as its own chapter that should be introduced a little bit later.
As result. Chapter 1 part 1 is now Prologue.
Chapter 1 part 2 is now chapter 1 part 1.
Prologue is now chapter 1 part 2 ( Hitman and Master )
Futhermore, I am currently working on improving Deathblow's apperance in (chapter 1 part 2). My original intention was to introduce him as a prideful hitman who had history with Master Astra, but I didn't show it well enough while going too far into "he likes being evil". I hope this change will make him less one-dimentional.
Chapter 2 part 1 should be ready for uploading tomorrow if nothing goes wrong.