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  • 165 weeks
    Sweetolebob18 injury

    Sweetolebob18 was a top proof-reader of Tails or Innocence and Tails of Sacrefice. Two months ago, he had a car accident, and now he require 6500 $ for knee operation, which he can't affod.

    I can't afford to help myself, but if any of you is capable of assisting him in anyway, I am certain he will be most grateful.

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    2 comments · 1,199 views
  • 193 weeks
    Chapter 15 - Two small scene changes

    Hello everyone. Just wanted to inform you that based on feedback from "RebelRogue12" and with his help, I altered two scenes.

    It is nothing much, but thought I should inform you regardless. Added stuff is marked in bold:

    Scene one:

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    1 comments · 746 views
  • 193 weeks
    Scene change - Celestia's motivation - Feedback needed

    Hello all fans of this story. Due to high controversy regarding Celestia's actions and received feedback, I decided to expand on Celestia's scene to give better reasoning behind her actions.

    Sure, what she did is still a desperate and bold move, but I hope what I added will make it more understandeable and improve quality of the story.

    Added scene is marked in bold:

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    4 comments · 458 views
  • 193 weeks
    Scene change - Kyuubi's injury - Feedback needed

    Hello everyone.

    Considering the feedback, I came to conclusion that the scene where Shining Armor injured Kyuubi seemed more harsh and more intentional than I intended, so I decided to add minor changes.
    Also, it was pointed out to me that tails don't bleed, so I decided to adress it as well.

    Here is the altered scene, changed as marked in bold:

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    6 comments · 340 views
  • 198 weeks
    I appologize for the delay in updating

    Greetings all readers and fans of "Tails of Innocence"

    I would like to appologize for this long delay in updating this story. There are two reasons behind it:
    1) Chapter 9 felt rushed to me and I had difficulty figuring out how to expand on it in a satisfying way, but I finally succeded. I can only hope it will be enough.

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Jun
4th
2017

Small changes · 12:03am Jun 4th, 2017

Greetings everyone.

I just wanted to inform you that after receiving some feedback and talking with my proof-readers, we came to conclusion that Chapter 1 part 1 would serve a much better role as a prologue, while prologue is better as its own chapter that should be introduced a little bit later.

As result. Chapter 1 part 1 is now Prologue.
Chapter 1 part 2 is now chapter 1 part 1.
Prologue is now chapter 1 part 2 ( Hitman and Master )

Futhermore, I am currently working on improving Deathblow's apperance in (chapter 1 part 2). My original intention was to introduce him as a prideful hitman who had history with Master Astra, but I didn't show it well enough while going too far into "he likes being evil". I hope this change will make him less one-dimentional.

Chapter 2 part 1 should be ready for uploading tomorrow if nothing goes wrong.

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