Calling for Editors · 5:02pm Apr 26th, 2017
Hey, me again.
I think anyone who reads my story is aware of how this works; reply if you want to look at the chapter in its rough form and offer criticism. However, you should know that I'm not hugely happy with this chapter, so -- if you think there are things that can be added to the chapter to improve it -- by all means, please let me know.
Preemptive thanks.
I'll happily give it a look, though I'm only available in the evening for this sortof thing.
Sure, let's have a look
Id be willing to give it a look, but cant before the weekend- busy work week(bluh, 44 hours)
I'll give it a go.
I'd be willing depending on what you need.
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I'm willing to give it a look.
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I've taken the advice of Joural and removed the section at the beginning and added a few things to extend the other scene as well as added about a page's worth of text to extend the second scene. I would like if you would give the chapter a look again; the link you have should still work.
A few minor spelling errors, nothing too bad. So far.