It's Not an IGYALL Act Finale 'Til the Cops Show Up! · 4:17am Feb 21st, 2017
Only now, as I'm planning IYGALL's Act Three finale, did I realize this trend. Even in Act I, Suri and Scene still impersonated the police. And all I'll say is that it will continue with Midsweet!
While I expected her to do something towards the end of the act, I feel like her miniarc was too hastily planned...I got so focused on the Orange A-plot that I let some of the slice-of-life B-plots dangle a little. Bambi was supposed to get more development, the whole Suri issue would've been clarified, and I really put a torpedo in Scene/Coco ship time. Not to say that I regret the kidnapping arc, but...please do forgive these points and look forward to them in Act IV, which is basically where all the slice-of-life stuff that was supposed to be in Act III will go now. *sweatdrop*
On another topic, would you rather the Act III finale come this week or next? I am fine with either, but if it is written next week, I will likely update Light Pollution for this week's story.
