Warning: SPOILERS!!! · 11:25am Dec 14th, 2016
Seriously, this is a discussion regarding Tartarus Forged's future chapters. If you don't want to have the next chapter or two ruined for you, TURN AROUND!
That said, if you don't mind spoilers, follow the line down.
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Right! Onto business!
I have two options in regards to how I handle the next chapter, and would like your opinion on which you think I should do. And, of course, if you have an entirely different idea, speak up.
Option one - This was the original way I was going to do it. I was going to have Pinkie dive into the minds of each of her friends, bringing them back one by one, and then when it came time to do Twilight, all six of them would go and help her. By the time they get to Twilight, her shield will have been on the verge of collapse and she will be struggling just to think straight. Her friends will show up just in the nick of time and basically pull a motivation speech out of their collective asses, also using their own magic to not only amplify her shield, but drive the Nightmare Enchantment from Twilight's mind.
All in all, I'm leaning heavily towards this one, as it can be a great character development point for Twilight. in learning the values of Friendship.
Option two - I go the route of Rule of Cool and have Pinkie twist reality into a pretty pink bow when she wakes up, banishing the Nightmare Enchantment all in one go. Then they move on, and I'll add some conversation relevant to the plot.
So... what'll it be?
Option 1.
DEFINITELY Option 1
Honestly I think you should go with option one .
Number 1
It seems everyone would like option one right now. I think both are are cool but I would like to see option two as I want to see Twilight's reaction to what Pinkie just did and Nightmare Moon reacting to her devious spell getting beat that way.
I suggest option 1.
Reason one: Better development is always good, and Twilight’s relationships in this story need a little filling out.
Reason two: I greatly dislike the "Pinkie breaking reality because Pinkie" thing. A little bit for comedic purposes is one thing, but solving major plot devices with a cartoon gag hurts a story.
Number 1 in my opinion.I really hate the 4th wall breaking pinkie does. At most i only like it when Discord does it.I do have two other ideas you could do.
1. Discord breaks free from all the Chaos that has happen with Twilight and her use of forbidden arts ( Side note: Please don't make Discord just a complete idiot and make him either a alley to Twilight, frenemy or a Friend to Twilight. Always hate when stories just waste Discord's potential in stories)
2. Or like the Second one have Tirek come and save her. Him sensing his Pupil in danger and is in need of help.
Just some ideas that came into my mind
I like option 1