Review #7 - The Wrong Fork, The Return of the Dark Legion

I have two more stories for you today, they are:

The Wrong Fork by PoweredByTea
The Return of the Dark Legion by ringtail_mane

The Wrong Fork by PoweredByTea
(Slice of Life)
During a lull in the conversation at an upper-class charity dinner, Rarity takes a moment to contemplate some commonly held assumptions made of Princess Celestia. Specifically, her table manners.

Review
Rarity notices that Celestia is unsure which fork to use, so Rarity takes the wrong one and Celestia copies her.

This story has pretty good pacing in it, but it is drawn out a little to reach the 1,000-word requirement. There are very few errors in the text, which is quite nice. However, it does not seem planned out. Furthermore, it's tags seem to be missing one, but if it is, then doesn't exist.

Score: 5/10 Recommendation: Not recommended.

Personal Thoughts: Not really sure about this one, but have a review anyway.

The Return of the Dark Legion by ringtail_mane
(Adventure, Alternate Universe, Random, Tragedy)
One trip of the Cutie Mark Crusaders will reveal a secret from the Equestria Dark Ages, one secret than involve both Princess and Nightmare Moon affair, and was buried for 1000 years; one powerful army whose wait to be released again. Only Celestia and Luna will awake them and deal with them and the powerful unicorn, Grey Shadow, the Luna´s most loyal general.

Review
The CMCs stumble upon an old army of Luna's that turned into statues. Luna and Celestia go to turn them back into ponies, they rebel, Luna saves them all.

This story feels a little longer than it should be, but not too much. Unfortunately, there are many, many, many punctuation errors with it's dialogue. Though it does feel mostly planned out. All it's tags seem to fit as well, except maybe the "Tragedy."

Score: 5.5/10 Recommendation: If it interests you, read it; if it does not, then do not.

Personal Thoughts: An ok story, just missing punctuation in the dialogue.