BWUAHAHAHAH! (New chapter ready for editing!)

So, it took me freaking forever, but my next chapter is just about ready. I really hope I did this one justice, because it's one that I've been building up to for quite some time. I don't think I did all that well, but this is what I've got, and if I keep second guessing myself, it'll never get done.

Anyway, I feel like something is missing, so I'll be checking it over again tonight once I've gotten some sleep and am able to look at this from a more objective perspective. If you'd like to throw your own perspective in, please, be my guest!

Again, I'm going straight to bed, so I'll be unable to look at any of your comments for several hours. Feel free to destroy my work all you want. Peace!

Comments

[More Dakka]

Sleep? Who needs sleep when you have ponies?

[YellowStripedBat]

HUZZAH!

[Topaz Moon]

Unfortunately with my new job, I don't really have any time to look at it to see if spots anything... not that I am very good at that anyways.

[Knight Breeze]

4257727 No worries, man, I understand. Thanks anyway!

[Starbuck the Pegasus]

Good chapter. My only problem is that it answers one question, and leaves us with three more! Though I suppose that's simply the nature of cliffhangers.