May
31st
2016
This is not the story you're looking for. · 12:51am May 31st, 2016
No, seriously. It isn't.
I've been a bad author and a terrible person. I know y'all are impatiently waiting for TLaP to update, but something got into my head that I just had to do. It's clop. It's kinky. It involves horses and no humans.
So... Does anyone want to proofread it? 
I understand if, as punishment for my failure as the author of the story you're here for, you don't.
I'll get back to your regularly-scheduled dose of Joe Scaredycat's Adventure's in the Canterlot Dungeons afterward, I swear! (I've got like 2k words down on it anyway.)
sure I will give it a look over as time permits
You're the baddest, terrible-est author I know! But you also write some decent stuff, so I guess that's acceptable. If you don't upload that story, at least send me a copy!
I could whine about your lack of work on the story, but that'd be the pot calling the kettle black, since I seldom do any kind of productive stuff in my free time.
I don't think your a bad writer.
However, i can't take you up on the offer ITS NOT YOU, ITS ME. 
I could do it.
How long is it?
Depends... is the clop all OC's? Is it character specific? Is there fetishes involved? Will there be plot?
2k? Cripes, mate. If you were me, I'd be telling you to be ashamed.
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Aye. The reason I asked was because I know a lot of people would probably love to help with TLaP (I've got private messages to prove it), but I don't expect nearly so many to be into clop, especially something like this.
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It's Horse on Pony, starring Flitter, with some heavy role-play. It touches on a number of fetishes, but doesn't specifically include them. There's no real plot, but there is some world-building to better frame the events.
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9800 words.
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'Cause... You'd publish a 2k word chapter?
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It's Horse on Pony.
funny as I have a idea for a vary long story that will have Horse on Pony among several other fetishes I just need to find some one to right it. as I can not put thought to word for crap.
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Do I have you on Skype?
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I, uh, don't think so...
I dunno... That one is pretty far outside my domain of expertise...
Or, "Damnit, Jim! I'm a copper, not a clopper!"
Having said that, if you want, I can take a look. Chalk it up to morbid curiosity, if nothing else...
Perhaps. I know I am a bit late to the party, but I might be able to offer a couple pointers. Granted I am only a reader of such content, not a writer. Though I doubt I will be able to improve upon what you have by much, I can offer some general suggestions as to where it could go or how to improve upon it. (Not in execution, but I could hazard a breakdown of some basic elements in some capacity.)
By horse on pony, are we talking about ones like the Saddle Arabians in the show?
Or something else entirely?