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deadpansnarker


"Be good to yourself, because nobody else has the power to make you happy."

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  • 9 weeks
    And The Winner Of My One-Shot Prize is... (drum roll please)

    ...None other than ZanyZapper ! I'm sure they'll be deliriously happy... when they finally come back online. :ajsmug:

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  • 10 weeks
    Do you want a one-shot written by moi? READ THIS...

    I'm pretty bored right so I've come up with an idea. The next 10 people who already follow me can come up with an idea for a one-shot, and I'll choose the one which I think is the most interesting and write it. I won't tell the winner who it is... they'll only know when their story is published! :pinkiehappy:

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  • 19 weeks
    Has anyone else noticed…

    …You can longer see how many people are viewing your story at a time, unless I’m missing something? It’s a shame, it was quite a useful tool to have… :fluttershysad:

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  • 20 weeks
    I’m curious…

    …What do you like most about writing?

    All you non-authors can just butt out; this question is just for the budding scribes out there to comment under.

    (nah, just kidding, you can hang around and read if you like, after all you’re so good at it :raritywink:

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  • 35 weeks
    I am SO glad this exists...

    As a environmental message, it's fair-to-middling at best.

    As a story which depicts how they might've handled Diamond Tiara AFTER her redemption, it's positively flawless.

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May
28th
2016

What I thought of Applejack's 'Day' Off SPOILERS · 6:49pm May 28th, 2016

What a dull episode. There was no real humour, other than Rainbow Dash showing a girlie side, a joke we've seen before.

What we haven't seen before though, is Applejack being so finicky about sticking to an over elaborate routine when quite clearly it would be far more efficient to simplify things (the Zap Apple ritual is different in that it actually WORKS), something that feels as out of character as her over-protectiveness of Apple Bloom in Somepony To Watch Over Me. It feels that trait was shoe-horned in here just to compliment the half-baked moral. It doesn't do the screenplay writers any favours when they appear to be making up stuff as they go along.

Aside from that, Twilight's appearance feels nothing more than arbitrary, Spike is similiarly left with little to do (and what's with his obsession with pies?) and, I may get butchered for this, but I starting to suffer from as much Rarity overkill as I did during season 5 when she had three episodes in a row. There was nothing to distinguish this 22 minute episode in any way, other than Spoiled Rich's enjoyable little role. "She lives in a mansion, you know." :ajbemused:

It might have been more amusing if the rest of the Apple clan had stuck around to help out or hinder, but I guess we'll never know. (So, all three of them have gone to market on the same day? Nice excuse to get them out of the picture, scripters) All in all, I can say this is a thoroughly unengaging episode I don't plan to revisit anytime soon. Let's hope the last two before the hiatus are an improvement.

Oh, and that weaksauce Twilight Mission Impossible gag? My vote for worst reference of the season so far. 2/5

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There's no such thing as Rarity overkill. >.>

3979287 Not you, darling. Your weaker counterpart on the show.
Don't worry, my feelings for you will remain unchanged, whether it be sleet or snow, rain or shine, heaven or hell. I may even put a little something in your patreon account...
Checks lottery numbers... Maybe next week... :duck:

3979300 ...Zinged. I am bedazzled by your perfect and flattering response. Well played, dear sir. Well played.

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