May
27th
2016
I got raged · 12:03am May 27th, 2016
I'm too scared to read it!!
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I've been raged three times. Just read it. Don't be scared Thesame guy who did yours I think did one of mine.
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But it's the one story I know I didn't do the best, MY best on!
If it helps, I did some of the raging, and we did our very best to be level headed in our rage. I take pride in not being ridiculous, and wanted to make sure that the other reviewer *didn't* go off without a moderating factor who likes parts of the story more.
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That's calming.
I'll give it a read. ...
Thanks.
Well I have gone thought, and he doesn't really paint a pretty picture of your story, but does at least say it has some redeeming qualities, but it's drowned out by what he sees by a serious lack of research on the the subject autism that your character isn't consistent with a typical behavior of of an autistic children and that their isn't enough info about the foal's condition (like age) and familial situation which make it difficult to judge the severalty of his condition which make make it feel that you are just want the readers to pity the pore kid for the sake of pity. their are other things he keep ranting about, but that is the jest of it.
Given that that I am myself an Asperger ( among other conditions) part of the high functioning spectrum I feel that I could that some of my own input of my own childhood might have helped. God know I had a vivid imagination back then and that I was in my own little world and that it was very hard to relate to anyone.
I just want to point out that it was in the MY stories folder, and I'll echo Shrinky's sentiment, we did our best to be measured and fair in our criticism.
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Oh, pshaw, I'm over it.
It wasn't that bad and it's, admittedly, my least favorite work.
Thanks, though!
I appreciate the time y'all took to read that story. My story.