With Regards to Equine Fall... · 9:40pm May 17th, 2016
So, as a lot of you have noticed and rejoiced... a lot of work has been done to our dear and beloved Equine Fall over here.
However, I reread the entire thing last night and... well... HOW THE FUCK DID ANY OF YOU EVEN LIKE THAT SHIT? It's very non-descriptive and incoherent, and I constantly changed tense. (Going from 3rd person to 1st person to present tense to past tense).
Anyways, I'm gonna' go in and revise a bit of that over time. No clue when its going to be finished, as it means re-writing each chapter, or at the least, extensive revisions, but its going to happen.
Also... for those of you who care, the story is about to reach the "epic story-changing point" and delve into the actual concept of the story. No more lovey-dovey cuddling with mares pissing on each other (like... wtf was I trying to do there?).
Yeah... 
Brohoof /)
