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Knight Breeze


Just your average gaming geek/college student. I study computer science, play pathfinder, and write stories, and have a patreon!

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  • 49 weeks
    Xlibris

    Hey, you guys ever hear of Xlibris? I've got an offer from them to publish my book, but I'm getting some shady vibes from some of the reviews I've read about them. Any thoughts?

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  • 50 weeks
    Amazon's changing it's print costs.

    So, as of June 20th, Amazon will be changing its print costs. Specifically, everything is going to be a bit more expensive. If you were on the fence for buying a physical copy of my books, now's the time to change your mind, seeing as how the price is going to increase in a couple of months. Thought I'd give you all the heads up.

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    14 comments · 315 views
  • 51 weeks
    What I Am: Aftermath chapter.

    Hey, guys, I'm writing a conclusion chapter for What I Am. Nothing too substantial, given that a sequel and spin off already exist, but I thought I'd put it down as both a way to let those that don't exactly follow me (or, at the very least, don't follow my blog) know that the second book is out, and also know that A Darkened Sky is about to get a whole lot of chapters.

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    4 comments · 528 views
  • 52 weeks
    Fool's Gambit.

    Man, did you ever go back and just... cringe at what you did before? That happened to me with Fool's Gambit. The story has plenty of potential, that's not the problem. My problem is with how it's written. The prose is off, there are numerous errors, and I feel like the whole thing is rushed. Like, that first part could have easily been 4-5 chapters longer, and it would have been better for

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    2 comments · 236 views
  • 52 weeks
    Live on Google Play!

    Hey, guys, just wanted you to know that What I've Become and Nightmare of the Past is now live on Google Play! So, if you didn't have a kindle-compatible device before, you can buy both books for 3.99 each right now on Google Play! I'll be working to get them into more outlets during the next couple of days, so keep an eye out for them!

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Mar
14th
2016

Done! Just needs to be edited. · 6:05pm Mar 14th, 2016

Well, the next chapter of What I've Done is ready for action! Though, to tell the truth, this is probably going to be the last, real chapter of this book.

This book.

The ending is solid, leaves on a decent resolution, while at the same time it gives a decent cliffhanger, and is perfectly set up for the sequel. All that is needed now is an epilogue for this story, and the prologue for the next book: What I Am.

However, this chapter still needs editing and fine tuning, so if you guys would like to take a look at it while I head off to bed, I would be most grateful. I'll probably finish editing it sometime this evening, and publish it when it's finished.

For now, however, I am bone tired, and I have work in about ten hours, so good day!

Comments ( 2 )

I'm surprised you're not calling the sequel "Who I Am" to remove the dehumanizing aspect of the word "what." It would break the pattern of starting every story with "What I _____", but it seems to me like an acceptable thing to do given the theme of the stories and the resolution they were moving towards. But that's just my two cents; since you're the one who actually knows what the third story is going to be, you're the one who knows what the best name for it would be.

Anyway, I'm super excited and looking forward to it.

Just went through it. Glad I could help proofread. And excellent chapter overall.^^

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