Done! Just needs to be edited. · 6:05pm Mar 14th, 2016
Well, the next chapter of What I've Done is ready for action! Though, to tell the truth, this is probably going to be the last, real chapter of this book.
This book.
The ending is solid, leaves on a decent resolution, while at the same time it gives a decent cliffhanger, and is perfectly set up for the sequel. All that is needed now is an epilogue for this story, and the prologue for the next book: What I Am.
However, this chapter still needs editing and fine tuning, so if you guys would like to take a look at it while I head off to bed, I would be most grateful. I'll probably finish editing it sometime this evening, and publish it when it's finished.
For now, however, I am bone tired, and I have work in about ten hours, so good day!
I'm surprised you're not calling the sequel "Who I Am" to remove the dehumanizing aspect of the word "what." It would break the pattern of starting every story with "What I _____", but it seems to me like an acceptable thing to do given the theme of the stories and the resolution they were moving towards. But that's just my two cents; since you're the one who actually knows what the third story is going to be, you're the one who knows what the best name for it would be.
Anyway, I'm super excited and looking forward to it.
Just went through it. Glad I could help proofread. And excellent chapter overall.^^