Hmmm... chapter 117... · 5:00pm Jan 29th, 2016
As i near 20k words... im beginning to realize that this is going to be too long for a single chapter. Luckily, at the 7000 word mark theres is a spot where i can cut it in two. It will be an abrupt halt in the action, but that will leave me with 13k words of chapter 118 already written, meaning i can have two updates out fast.
So i think i'm going to do just that. Besides... i'd hate for a certain... part near the beginning to fall into the shadow of the rest of the chapter
So chapter 117 will be split into 117 and 118 meaning you expect the next chapter to be out VERY soon.
CALM! I told you not to kill Rainbow Dash! Now how are you going to finish the story?
(I'm teasing you)
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I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT IM DOING!
Disclaimer: I actually do.
3720973 Where's that outline you are so proud of? Did you send it to the moon? Now how are you going to get back?
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the outline is just a story map It's not organized chapter by chapter. Before each chapter i refer to it, and decide how far forward i want to move before ending the chapter. And on many occasions im forced to change that end mark for length reasons
3720990 Still, Did you have to kill Rainbow Dash and Soarin?
Let's see how many people we can get completely lost with this.
You are such a tease sometimes man....
i wonder whether I betting pool should be started for which wonderbolt couple gets pregnant first,
prime contenders in my head would be of course soarin and rainbow, misty and fire
directly behind, star and squall, blaze and wind
underdog for this I've got fleet and calm
longshot Spitfire and wave
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Except that i've said over and over again that nopony is getting pregnant in this story
So, the fighting continues…
3720996 …y-yeah, you succeed…
3721022 He's fun to get going like that. You just have to be careful.
3721021 who said anything about this story?
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Oh you...
I'm just waiting for more romantic shenanigans. I feel the need...the need for more fluff. You did set up Spitfire and Wave pretty hard. I imagine those two going at each other like dogs on viagra. I come for the fluff, stay for the battle scenes. And no I don't mean come like that. Get your head out of the gutter.
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OH GREAT NOW I AM THINKING THAT
...there better be some reference to Halo in this!
3721045 3721050 Is that a request for a WaveFire scene I see there?
awesome art work if this is a hint to the chapter I think the split will be best.
Bring it, son. I've been reading Project Horizons, 20k is par for the course.
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oh i don't doubt that you could handle it, it just started getting too long from my perspective, especially since something at the beginning of the chapter and something at the 'end' that will now be in the next chapter will compete for hilarity.
The first includes your absolute favorite character to edit
You're killin me, Smalls!
(Name the movie, get a cookie.)
Also, thank Celestia for no preggers Wonderbolts. That phase of life is crazy enough without, you know, uncontrollable black magic and Shadowbolts on your tail. However, I do think I speak for the majority of readers when I say this better end with a Soarindash wedding or you'll have a pitchfork toting mob after you.
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Sandlot
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Oh please god no not Twister!
3720973 Sometimes I wonder
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Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...
No tears...
Only dreams now...
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Dohohohohoho
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It has been sent to you both
3721042 ^^
did i miss any couples?
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nope thats about all of them
3721045 Nah, it'll probably be something really gentle, sweet and adorable.
....at least until Wave is all healed up...
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Your welcome.
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Maybe?...Although, I don't need you writing clop bc of me, Lucky. I already have enough on my conscience. I'm trying to scrape what little dignity I have left in this world.
But, yes if you could please, thank you.
Also, I too think the artwork is as RD puts it, SO AWESOME!
3721465 keyword "about" :B
you know they have a version of the beatles in the canon, I wonder what other bands there are in equestria. Right said Fred perhaps?
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Yes, that is, of course, if Spitfire can control herself unlike the time at Fleetfoot's party.
Everyone else is talking about Shadowbolts and fluff and action
and I'm just over here fantasizing about Rapidfire.
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YOU AND YOUR CLIFFHANGER... SPOILER... TEASER THINGAMAJIGS. YOU ARE DRIVING ME CRAZY (in a good way, but not in that way ) BTW if you're seperating into 2 chapters that means you've already the 1st... SO WHY HAVEN"T YOU POSTED IT YET?
Yes Dashie, yes you are...
Looking forward to it!
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proofreading and editing