"Waiting for Sunset" is a huge hit! · 1:01am Jan 14th, 2016
Fast as lightning, sharp as a sword
Finally I've been waiting for this one! Sunset Shimmer is the best!
-- The Zebra Hybrid
The amount of emotions in this are fluid and real-like which was well built up. I've got to say this is probably the best one I've read out of the Steam Collection. You've outdone yourself, my friend. Keep it up.
-- EagleOfDeath15
This... was amazing! I've waited for so long for Sunset to have her spot in the Steam Collection. I guess you can say I've been... Waiting for Sunset.
I know it was a bad pun, but it was so worth it.
-- Thunder Roller
Lightning, you've outdone yourself. This one is the best out of all of them. It was so amazing.
-- Wolfkid9963
It has been a very long wait...but it was so worth it.
I'm absolutely speechless, this is by far the best of the steam collection by a freaking mile!
-- StevieBond
Another great story in the Steam Collection!
-- FrostGuardian
This story was such a tease towards the end!
Just when things was heating up! I love the attention to detail in terms of the expression of "You" and Sunset Shimmer. Absolutely flawless! I felt myself mesmerized by the cleverly written dialogue and the events leading up to the climax (No pun intended
) I'm glad that I can add another satisfying read to my list! Great work!
-- Fateful Pony
The wait was definitely worth it. I really need to take some notes on how to write like this.
You know, you're just further cementing yourself as my favorite author on FiMFiction. Since I don't read much outside of this website, you're also easily in my top three favorite writers of all time. People might accuse me of ass-kissing, but your ass is worthy.
-- RattPitt
Possibly the most risque entry to this series.
Glorious.
-- Jarvy Jared
This was the closest you ever got to sex in this series without it being sex. This is definitely the best one so far, and is going in my favorites list AND my special folder...
Because this story took me THERE... (congratulations for being the first one in months to take me there).
-- SapphireLibra3
This goes right next to "Farm Hand: Apply Within" that you did. Great Job, and welcome back to the club.
-- Trader_Jack
I LOVE IT!!!!!
-- Snivypony
This was the best story of the whole series!! Definitely worth the wait, and you were on point with the feels. AWESOME!!
-- Pegasisters
Dude...
The Passion!
The Emotion! You brought the feels!!!
I like this one the best!
Now to name our second person self, he is empathetic and caring, pure of heart and chivalrous. "Galiant Hearts"
Bravo dude!
-- Sipioc
That was a great read this is probably the best one yet the connection had some real depth and I loved the kissing while naked part it was genius.
-- MLPFIMFOREVER
YES! I've felt like it's been forever since your last one of these. And this one is probably the best yet. I loved it!
I'm glad you're back and in good form, LightningSword!
-- Mr Grapefruit
Wait, this is just teen?
Huh.
I LOVED THIS!!!!
The emotion, the character development, the romance, the scene at the end, it's all brilliant!
What I really love is that it feels real, and believable. It feels as though the feelings toward each other are real, and it just fits so well!
It's been a long time since I read a romance fanfiction, and just fanfiction in general, this good, and this well written.
Keep on writing my friend, and don't let anyone, or anything stand in your way.
-- Draconaquest
Back from crazy stuff happening, and I get knocked into my chair, and displayed a mug to put my tears into to ship straight to you for your pleasure! This was SO GOOD! I'd clap so much, I might have nubs for hands by the time I stop XD
Keep up the good work, and fight them haters if they come at ya, your too good for the likes of them! This is GOLD!
-- Amethyst-Fang
I gotta admit, this has to be your best work yet!
The story was very well done and I could not stop reading.
This was great dude!
-- Bolt Blazer
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful
This is the first story I read from "The Steam Collection" installment and I instantly got carried away by your story because the way you put Sunset and those around her at your story reminds me when I was still licking the dirt.
Everything really fits, the atmosphere, the way you arrange the sentences...everything.
Minor spelling errors but I don't think anybody's gonna be bothered with it
Keep up the good work buddy!
-- Lightning Spear
Welcome back Lightning! This certainly is the steamiest of the lot. Also, Yay for best human!
-- Avvy
....you really like grabbing butts, don't you?
Not that I'm complaining. If not for people like you, I'd have one less fun thing to read in stories.
Truth be told, I'm not that much of a big fan when it comes to 2nd person stories. I like looking through the eyes of a character whose personality has already been established, and being inserted into the protagonist's shoes just kills the idea of rooting for said protagonist in whatever he/she does. But it doesn't mean I hate them, either. In fact, I've been shadowing the majority of your "2nd Person Canon/OC stories" for a while. They're all pretty darn good reads, albeit just too short for my tastes. This little piece with Sunset is no different.
The interaction between Sunset and the protagonist is paced appropriately, with them starting out a bit rocky and then building up the bond as the day progresses. I couldn't help but think that despite how well-written it was, the time it took for them to "get together" was too short to matter. I did find it funny that they acknowledged that in-story, though. In addition, the character development is believable - or at least, as believable as character development in MLP is going to get (maybe a bit too optimistic, but cathartic). But what clinches it is the ending scene where the two "come together", in a manner of speaking. You have a habit of writing these in a way that makes it all seem poetic, romantic, lewd and erotic all at once. Sweet and deliciously perverse at the same time.... like peanut butter and chocolate.
So yeah, this one is definitely going in my favorites. Might do a review of your other stories when I get around to it. In the meantime, I do hope you continue. Thanks a ton for taking the time to read this, and have a very wonderful day!
-- Parasoil
That was beautiful and enjoyed.
-- darkwalker787
Stay quick, stay sharp, and thank you all so much for reading! 
Congrats on all the love. You deserve every bit of praise. BTW, is the Steam series finished? I think there was TS left, but I might be confusing that with the EG Erotica series.
3684558 Yep, Twilight is the only one left to go. I'm working on her story in my head, but nothing solid just yet.
You forgot butts.
Thank you.
Where's the thumbs-up button for the actual blog post? Is warranted here, methinks.
It was a pleasure.
This storys are amazing you should be happy. My top favourites are Sunsets and Applejacks.
You're thanking me? No, thank you for writing these stories. Every single one of them.
The thing I like about them is that they're arousing and steamy without being dirty. A lot of times I find that good stories like this get lost at the end with the sex scene and then they just turn to smut. That doesn't happen here though. Every one of them has a great story, are really hot, and then you let the final part be up to our imagination (which I have a very active imagination).
All in all, I love your stories. Keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to Twilight's story. I'm thinking that one's going to probably be the hottest one out of the bunch.
3684578 Hey Lightning, how about a finale with everyone of the Humane 7 meeting up along with all their boyfriends ala "Goal"?
3684816 I doubt it. Showing a bunch of characters that were meant to be shown from the 2nd person view wasn't a wise decision, as it turns out. It breaks the immersion and ruins the perspective. Maybe the girls by themselves, but no, not with their "significant others". Sorry.
So... are you just going onto the comments section of one of my stories and stealing a bunch of my comments/reviews?
I'm at least
% sure you did. There's no way all of these belong to you.
3684884 LoL, swing my the comments section of "WfS" and have a look, if you don't buy it. Judge for yourself.
3684888 Oh please you know I'm a terrible judge. Also I'm too lazy to check so I'll just sick with my lopsided and hastily made allegations.
Welp time to submit this story to
Rage ReviewsEQD on your behalf3684893 Ha. Nice try. Either way, they won't take it.
Congratulations on hitting the featured for your recent story in the Steam Collection. You deserve all the praise for your work, talent and most importantly, because you're a good friend. Keep it up and may the best of luck be upon you.