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  • 164 weeks
    Sweetolebob18 injury

    Sweetolebob18 was a top proof-reader of Tails or Innocence and Tails of Sacrefice. Two months ago, he had a car accident, and now he require 6500 $ for knee operation, which he can't affod.

    I can't afford to help myself, but if any of you is capable of assisting him in anyway, I am certain he will be most grateful.

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  • 191 weeks
    Chapter 15 - Two small scene changes

    Hello everyone. Just wanted to inform you that based on feedback from "RebelRogue12" and with his help, I altered two scenes.

    It is nothing much, but thought I should inform you regardless. Added stuff is marked in bold:

    Scene one:

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  • 192 weeks
    Scene change - Celestia's motivation - Feedback needed

    Hello all fans of this story. Due to high controversy regarding Celestia's actions and received feedback, I decided to expand on Celestia's scene to give better reasoning behind her actions.

    Sure, what she did is still a desperate and bold move, but I hope what I added will make it more understandeable and improve quality of the story.

    Added scene is marked in bold:

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  • 192 weeks
    Scene change - Kyuubi's injury - Feedback needed

    Hello everyone.

    Considering the feedback, I came to conclusion that the scene where Shining Armor injured Kyuubi seemed more harsh and more intentional than I intended, so I decided to add minor changes.
    Also, it was pointed out to me that tails don't bleed, so I decided to adress it as well.

    Here is the altered scene, changed as marked in bold:

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  • 196 weeks
    I appologize for the delay in updating

    Greetings all readers and fans of "Tails of Innocence"

    I would like to appologize for this long delay in updating this story. There are two reasons behind it:
    1) Chapter 9 felt rushed to me and I had difficulty figuring out how to expand on it in a satisfying way, but I finally succeded. I can only hope it will be enough.

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Jan
10th
2016

Voting for Vinyl's 'secret title' · 9:16pm Jan 10th, 2016

So here is the deal.

In the recent chapter of "Path of Kindness and Blood", Vinyl's title was revealed.

"Vinyl the Undying"

An obvious Undertale reference as this title was meant to symbolize Vinyl's ability to survive and get out of trouble. Since a few readers suggested alternative titles, I decided to start voting while giving small hints about Vinyl's ability that make her so resilient.

The rules for voting are simple. I will post comments with one title each. You can upvote one or a few titles you like and downvote one or a few titles you dislike, or post comment with your own title. The title with most upvotes minus downvotes wins.

Hint:
Vinyl's special talent revolve around music. After being turned into thestral as she gained ability to use dark magic, Vinyl developed an unique ability to manipulate the sound-waves around her.

-She can mute her every action (running, shooting beams of magic, jumping and so on will make no noise, making her an unhearable target).
-She can also manipulate sound of her surroundings. Distract enemy by creating a noise in opposite direction, mute her enemy (making it impossible to call for help or sound the alarm). -She can change the volume and way someone else speaks, or even cause others to hear as if someone was speaking from a direction where there are no speakers.

Because of Vinyl's carefree nature, she sometimes use those abilities to prank others, but I didn't have the opportunity or the need to display it in my story yet.

Those are all info I can give. Please vote on posted comments or post a title of your own and let others vote on it. Thanks in advance.

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Comments ( 18 )

Orignal title:

"Vinyl the Undying"

upvote if you like it, downvote if you dislike it

Suggested title: "Vinyl the Ghost"

upvote if you like it, downvote if you dislike it

Suggested title: "Vinyl the Elusive"

upvote if you like it, downvote if you dislike it

Suggested title: "Vinyl the Ethereal"

upvote if you like it, downvote if you dislike it

Suggested title: "Vinyl the Mirage"

upvote if you like it, downvote if you dislike it

Suggested title: "Vinyl the Phantom"

upvote if you like it, downvote if you dislike it

Suggested title: "Vinyl the Shadow"

upvote if you like it, downvote if you dislike it

Suggested title: "Vinyl the Viligant"

upvote if you like it, downvote if you dislike it

Suggested title: "Vinyl the Shade"

upvote if you like it, downvote if you dislike it

Comment posted by aduck deleted Jan 10th, 2016

Suggested title: "Vinyl the Vanishing"

upvote if you like it, downvote if you dislike it

I'm going to admit, I chose ethereal cause it reminds me of XCOM.

They all seem to follow the formula of Vinyl the ________

Maybe a title to do with bats? Their creatures of the night and have echolocation.
Edit: Maybe 'The Siren''? Sirens lure people astray with sound.

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The Viligant Siren (?)
Upvote and Downvote!!

You almost need to do a obligatory prank session with Vinyl, Pinkie and Rainbow now

much as I like vinly the undying i'll have to vote it down. I -like- the title but with people seeing her as sans now she's just going to turn into an undertale joke character in their eyes at this rate. I think the best title that fits her is something about not being able to catch sound. but I failed to think of any kind of title that's fitting.

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