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KrishnaKarnak


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  • 349 weeks
    Phew.

    It's been a wild year and a half or so. Just wanted to stop by and say I'm presently still alive and am doing better, if anyone ever wondered to themselves, 'where did that Krishna dude run off to'.

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  • 423 weeks
    Another six days in the hospital...

    It's been a trip. That's the best way to describe it. I went back to work for a night and a half. Then it became very, very clear that I was only working because I wanted to, and not because I was in any way healthy enough for it. Just spent six very long days under 24 observation (144 hour observation technically). I'm safe to go home, but not yet in any condition to work. I'm not up to giving a

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  • 424 weeks
    I lost my fight

    Someone close to me told me this isn't losing, but they say you're your own harshest critic. Last Saturday morning, my mental health decline hit what was rock bottom and, long story short, I put myself in the hospital. The only way to describe the last week would be 'exhausting'. The mental health care system in Newfoundland is barely functional at best and damn near non existent at worst... same

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  • 430 weeks
    Alright, here goes

    The last thing I wrote and submitted to FIMFiction was on Christmas Eve, 2014. I wanted to try to return to WRTMI then, write another chapter or something before the big rewrite I wanted to do, but it just never happened. The only writing I did last year was basically some 4chan fetish crap, the entire time wanting to continue my main fic but feeling utterly incapable of doing so.

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  • 430 weeks
    Some sort of update soon.

    Had a bit of a writing renaissance lately. Within the next few days, I'll try and give you guys some insight on what's going to happen. One thing that kept me writing in the past was how it used to bring me some comfort from my day to day life. As that disappeared, as did my urge and ability to write. I'm beginning to get something of a spark again, but I don't yet know if I'm going to finish the

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Jul
16th
2015

SOIAF-styled chapters? · 5:53am Jul 16th, 2015

An idea I've had in my mind for awhile now was styling the newer WRTMI's chapters after George R. R. Martin's A Song of Ice and Fire series. Each chapter is prefixed with a character's name, which is 3rd person personal PoV character (Like I do with ol' Dashie) and numbered thus, as opposed to individual chapter titles. Because I plan to move the PoV from Rainbow Dash at times to show different events around the storyline, I've been thinking of this is worth my while. Or perhaps a mixture! (example, 'Airshow tryouts vs. that Spitfire bitch, RD-IV').

More examples ala the actual table of contents for the SOIAF books.

Not only can I build up the events of Act 2/Book 2 this way by introducing a PoV that isn't interacting with the main plot (think how Daenerys Targaryen's side plot on the continent of Essos is largely seperate from the events of Westeros), but it just gives me more room to expand the narrative. With each chapter being chronologically ahead of the last, I can avoid confusing scenarios where different PoVs take place at the same time, though I will need to carefully plan on what to show and what the characters will simply hear of.

Anyways, fun idea I've had, wanted your input.

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It's a format and writing style that seems to work. I use 3PP a lot (pretty much exclusively in what I have on site here). As to PoV characters as chapter titles, I've thought of it, but not done so yet.

Personally, I like the chapter names too, so maybe you could combine this idea with that into something like this: "37 Brothers No More [Rainbow Dash]" I do like the idea of switching POVs and expanding the narrative. Speaking of that, how's chapter 38 going after all? :pinkiehappy: Tbh I hope it's not coming too soon cause I still need to reread a lot of Act 2 :rainbowlaugh: And on another note, have you read my latest story yet? :duck:

3243463 Just suffixing the name could work, or hell, just putting the character at the top of the page.

I'll be reading it tonight. Actually saw it earlier while browsing, but didn't check the author :facehoof:

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Haha no problem :P Just whenever you get a chance! It's not done yet anyway, the readers convinced me to write a second part :rainbowlaugh:

Also do you still want me to make those chapter headers once WRTMI starts up again? I think I still have the photoshop file I was making them from... not entirely sure about that though

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