Minor Story Update · 6:57pm Jul 13th, 2015
I have reverted "Paying with a Smile" to its original name, "The Price of a Smile", and added a tiny Prologue chapter at the beginning to act as a stronger hook.
Nothing in the story has been changed.
Being against evil doesn't make you good.
I have reverted "Paying with a Smile" to its original name, "The Price of a Smile", and added a tiny Prologue chapter at the beginning to act as a stronger hook.
Nothing in the story has been changed.
Yay!
I never understood the new name.
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I realize you wrote this seventeen months ago, but:
It was to make the meaning of the title explicit. The name I ended up reverting to (which, granted, is a better name), is more likely to be misread as "this is how much a smile costs" rather than the intended "the price is Twilight's smile (the price for knowledge)". The former way still makes perfect sense, but it's not as evocative to me.