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Jul
23rd
2012

The Morning After the Wedding. · 9:42pm Jul 23rd, 2012

Here it is, folks. My entry for the sexy minute pony stories. I present to you: The Morning After the Wedding. Also, possibly another bonus chapter to Eternal as I feel it fits.

The morning light shone through the windows of Carousal Boutique, and onto the face of a white unicorn with a purple, slightly messy mane lying alone on her oversized bed with the sheets covering her. As the light danced across her, she began tossing and turning. Her face started turning red as small moans escaped her soft, white lips. Suddenly, her back arched, and a pleased “AHHHHHHHHHHH!” resonated throughout the room, as she snapped into consciousness. She sat up, using her elbows to keep balance, and allowed her magic to levitate the sheet off of her. Under the sheet, between the unicorn’s thighs, was a tall purple and green drake with amethyst wings draped down his back split by large emerald spikes running from the top of his head to the end of his tail.

“Spike, darling, what are you doing?” the unicorn asked, a bit flustered from her wake up call.

Spike swallowed, licking his lips, before he spoke, “You said you wanted to be up by the break of dawn, so I woke you. Don’t worry; I made sure to get every drop so it wouldn’t stain the sheets. So Rarity, how did you like your awakening?”

“It was fantastic. We never did get to spend the night together after all the excitement of the wedding. How about we fix that right now?” she asked, using her most seductive tone.

“Love to,” Spike answered, climbing onto his wife and kissing her passionately on the lips.

Rarity could still taste a bit of herself on Spike’s lips and tongue; she’d be lying if she said she didn’t enjoy it. However, before Spike could go any further she stopped him with a hoof against his toned chest. “Spike, since this our first time as a married couple I want to do something special.”

“Sure Rarity, what did you have in mind?”

“Just wait here a moment, I’ll be right back.”

“Okay, beautiful.”

Spike watched as she left their now shared bedroom and headed into her bathroom. He noticed how she swayed her flanks flirtatiously obvious to the eyes on her. He couldn't help but smile at how lucky he was. Here he was with the most beautiful, generous, and loving mare in Equestria as his wife. His long time love was gorgeous even first thing in the morning. Her straight mane, untouched face, and the lack of fake eyelashes only seemed to compliment the natural beauty she held, a diamond inside and out. His train of thought was interrupted as the door opened revealing a breath taking sight.

Rarity reveled in the look of happy surprise as she walked towards the bed. She couldn’t blame him. After all, she did look stunning in her self-made, white, wedding dress embedded with diamonds, making the light sparkle around her. She had even kept her hair straight knowing how he loved it. Though she did comb it; she was a lady, after all.

“Wow. You look just as amazing as you did yesterday, maybe more. I’ll never understand how you ponies can look even hotter clothed than you do naked.”

“You’re looking pretty good yourself Spike,” she complimented, pushing Spike backwards onto the bed. She swept onto his legs and rested her head near his waist. With a warm breath and half lidded eyes, she coaxed Spike’s dragons from their cave in his scales. She a took moment to marvel at the two large testaments to dragon virility, before pushing them together and running her tongue over them.

She delighted in the soft euphoric growls of her husband as she lathered him up with her tongue. She placed her muzzle at the tips and dove into the pre-cum covered twins, preparing them for what was to come next. She revealed in the slightly salty taste of her drake as she pulled away, leaving him fully lubricated.

She used her magic to lift her dress up revealing her soaking wet marehood. She slid her lower lips to the base of Spike’s swords and began rolling up and down them covering them even further in her own excitement.

“Rarity, you’re torturing me,” Spike gently growled out.

“It’s, hard, on me, too,” She panted out between breathes.

Feeling that Spike was now properly prepared, she rose onto her hind legs and allowed his draconic assets to stand fully ready. She brought herself down to his tips as one pushed against her flower, and the other found its way to under her tail. With one quick motion she pushed herself onto him, going about halfway down. She screamed in pleasant pain as the sensation of being filled in both ends settled in.

Haven taken a moment to adjust, she moved all the way down hilting him inside her. She began bouncing on top of him, her dress matching her movements. She moaned in bliss as she ran her hoof through her mane enjoying every second of the ride. She had started slow, but feeling a familiar tingling sensation, she quickened her pace. The preparation had speed things along quickly as they approached their orgasms.

Spike, having felt that Rarity was doing all the work and recognizing the abundant signs of the soon to come ending, moved his claws to her ass and began pulling and pushing the firm luscious curves, tossing in a slap for good measure every few seconds. Spike grabbed Rarity and pulled her on to him as far as possible before shooting his seed into her while stifling a might roar.

The incredibly warm, thick, filling sensation of Spike releasing into both of her entrances drove Rarity to the peak of euphoria as her dam broke sending waves of immeasurable pleasure coursing through her and shooting out of her combined with Spike’s own arousal. She shouted out in ecstasy as it over took her.

Rarity collapsed onto her dragon, a sweaty, panting, exhausted, and ecstatic mare’s white dress meeting the equally drenched scales of her love. They snuggled up against one another, Spike’s arms and wings encasing her.

“I must be the luckiest drake alive,” Spike said, a happy smile spread across his face.

“And tonight, I’ll let you use the whips, chains, and other toys we keep in the basement,” Rarity announced, already thinking of the fun to come.

“Can’t wait.”

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More power to the dragons!!!!
I swear Rarity will be the mother to the Qilin species, just mark my words.

244902 I think I just figured out my punishment if Hell actually does exist.

244903 This is a Quilen

wow.zamimg.com/uploads/blog/images/2087.png

What you're thinking of his called a Kirin.

neondragonart.com/Art/archive_selectart/kirin.jpg

thepwnzone.files.wordpress.com/2011/05/memes-spiderbone.jpg

Not really but I think it gets the "point" across

244913 Tell me about it in hell with knives for hands and cant fap fuck ill just stap myself in the neck

I'm so damn tempted to stay up after this is posted at 3 am my time for an hour. I wanna see how it's received.

244920 I just need to find an adorable succubus to help me relieve myself :raritywink:

244922 I want more sparity

244930 good idea but this is hell the only hot thing there is well hell

244913
From my understanding they are both to correct term, just depicted differently by the chinese and korean cultures. i promise you i can find you pictures that depict both creatures for both names XD

244902>>244903>>244920 It is clear to everyone Spike is "of age," yes?

What are Sexty Minute Ponies and how the shit do you write one?

Excellent for an hours work. Wish I could pull of stuff like this... I'd have tried entering, but I don't think 10 sentences would have made much of an entry... I write VERY slow. :derpytongue2:

244935 And yes, it is quite clear that he is of age.

244935
Bah, remember who ya talking to here, I'll always believe spike is of age when it comes to rarity!!!!

244936 It's a Tumblr blog that gives two prompts a week, and you are to write the story in sixty minutes. Anyone may submit a story. Here is the link sexty minute pony stories.

244937 The key is to plan it out before hand. You have an hour from when you start typing, but you can spend many figuring out what you want in the story. For instance, I had the wake up call, the wedding dress, and the end figured out before I started typing. I also use the double phallus and internal shoot for everything. So I just let it flow from there. I'm quiet pleased with how it turned out.

I thought so too, but they have a rule about age's. I mean their married, and he's way taller now, I don't see how anyone could argue it.

244940 Me too.

244947 Time warp! I do that a lot...

244953 Ah. I can see how that would work. I need to work on my planning skill then... Thanks for the advice! :twilightsmile:

244953
Wait come to think of it... no ones really down ant fan art of spike and rarity child as a kirin or qilin.......most just as some pony with one or two dragon features....excuse me while I grab my sketch book.

244956 Yep. I never run into a chapter without an idea of what's going in it. Now of course I will admit things get added as I write cause I have one of those, "Holy shit this is amazing," moments.

244958 Oh there most certainly is. All over D.A. they tend to be named after gems. Personally, I would love to see one done in a similar fashion to the Kirin above, but with wings and a real unicorn horn.

244959 I have those while writing too. Of course, then I have to figure out what the rest of the story is going to have in it. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png

Love it when they happen though.

244944 HNNG, URGE TO WRITE SPARITY IS RISING

244965
I've seen quite a few art work of them having a kid, but none of it struck me as a what we were talking about right now. A lot I saw looked like a pony with some dragon features and visa versa. None I saw personally never seem to pull from the mythology of the many different species of dragons their are. Maybe I just missed the ones that did it well, but not too many worked for me.

244968 They are amazingly useful.

244970 Don't get to excited, much to my chagrin, most of the prompts are aimed towards lesbian shipping if they're open to ship interpretations. There is not one Sparity piece on either the sexty minute NSFW blog or the thirty min SFW blog, and it pisses me off to no end! Hence my need to reconcile this sacrilege to my taste.

244977 "no straight shipping"
what

"no sparity"





WHAT!?

244979 Yea it's pretty bad. I can't blame the mods really as there have been a number of really solid chances to do it. Notably, I never did as I'm quite busy usually. I blame the writers, who instead focused on doing horrible things to Spike every prompt that involved him. There was a prompt "have a character telling a story about a dragon," and one of the writers had Rarity telling her and Pinkie's kid how Spike let them be together so she could be happy. Now if that was the case, yea he probably would, but the fact of the matter is the guy was just fucking Spike over. There was no happy ending for the dragon. The last you hear of him, hes crying on a balcony lost in his own pain, the kid had never even heard of him before. Pisses me off to no end, TO NO END!

244983 What pisses me off about Rarity shipfics with anybody but Spike, aside from the obvious disregard of what happened in the show, is when they actually DO mention what happened in the show. Spike is either ignored entirely and never mentioned, or they write him fine and never getting the happy ending he deserves or the love. Oh no, we just get Spike totally fine with Rarity's constant teasing and sometimes cockteasing while she ruts around with whatever mare the author shipped her with, OR we get Spike's precious heart ripped out... OH WAIT, he already gave that away in Secret to my Excess, so Spike just gets kicked while knocked on the ground.

Any shipping regarding Rarity that isn't Spike makes me sick to my stomach in a literal sense.

244988 It does bother me horribly as well. Though I tend to let it go. Unless it's with Blueblood, and then fuck that writer in the ass.

244991 I physically cannot stomach non-Sparity Rarity shippings. If it's Blueblood, I'd probably instigate some hacker war.

244994 Yep. Need to burn 30 mins to the ground.

244994
me and you are friends, rarity will never ever everrrrrrr be with bluenlood (or fancy pants) as far as im concerned!

244997 Okay here's the thing. Fancy Pants is fucking awesome, and he's with Fleur. Those two are my third favorite hetero couple 2nd being Disclestia. I like the Cake's, but they're not very exciting.

Also, I just noticed it takes the 12 hours to start posting the stories so my ass is going to bed night all.

244932 i just finished watching titanic..... now im sad..... must turn sadness into inspiration :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright::pinkiehappy:

244996
I still have yet to find all the Sparity fics that are decent mostly because the ones I do find are retarded or usually sad. That, or the Sparity just happens to be in the middle of some epic war. o_o

244997
RarityxFancypants is the other shipping I'm most against, not because Fancypants is a douche (I don't like him JUST for the RarityxFP shipping), but because my headcanon agrees with the FancypantsxFleur.

245002
I know that, personally I thought fancy pants was awesome, especially his when he first appeared with fleur, Than I'm reading ships that have her with him and its like "wtf, the mans already married."

245004 How can anyone be sad? I just released clop. Fun, fun clop.

245005 You are aware I control the Sparity groups folders for the most part yes? Go, find the Sparity in the group folders!

245007 I know. Does not please me.

245009 I did look at it. I just know that not all Sparity goes there. o_o

245009 i read this and was happy, then i was forced into watching titanic, and now im sad. sad that leo di caperio is dead, sad that rose is so old, pissed of that she threw the fucking gem in the water (i would have sold that bitch!) an annoyed that my tween sister wouldn't shut the fuck up during the whole god damn movie :twilightangry2:

245011 All the good stuff does. Again, I filter the folders.

245013 Ironically, I laughed at the end. Also, the last time I saw it was when I was 10, good times.

245014 well in that case hallelujah. I don't remember if I submitted my Sparity. ;/

245017 you know u laughing at the end does not surprise me. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild:

245020 I did.

245022 I accept that I'm a horrible person. Of course most people are scum, so being a horrible person pleases me.

245024 ALRIGHTY THEN. I dunno if I mentioned it, but I am adding onto it. o_e

245024 thats not a very good way to look at life :pinkiesad2: i like to think that most ppl are good. we just notice the bad.

Not awkward enough. We're talking about a dragon fucking a pony here. That is innately awkward.

245025 Sounds good.

245030 Maybe if they did more good it'd be easier to notice. I'm a stick with pessimism.

245031 It's no their first night, the awkwardness has already been dealt with! Plus, I only had an hour. Looking back I failed to mention her clenching down on him as well.

Don't make me get the Bitch Bat.

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