Diary of the Dead: Prologue is revised

Hello, chaps.
You may have remembered me griping about how I really hated the characterization in the Prologue. Upon rereading it, I realized that after writing a few chapters, Cycle's personality was going to develop far differently than I had originally imagined, so I toned down the "card carrying chessmaster" vibe and did my best to bring forth the idea "he knows he's missing several marbles, and only a hard shake from losing the rest of them" while he does his best to not hurt anyone around him.

The next chapter in the works is mostly an intermission. A bit of an exposition dump, and a little look into the mechanics of my world.

So. Uh. Go read the Prologue. Its much better. Hopefully, the new chapter will get uploaded sometime this week.