. I've added a few things. Tweaked this and that. Fixed big derps. All changes and additions are live, though there are bound to be grammatical errors in 7-13.Midnight's Radiance chp3 · 11:42am Mar 24th, 2015
I'm pulling chapter 3. I got ahead of myself and posted an incomplete chapter, and for that, I'm so sorry. I'm at work atm so this will be a bit sloppy, but here's my sorry reguardless. I failed to deliver on several fronts when I posted this chapter, leaving to playing Trixie as dumber than she actually is, lacking tension by underplaying reactions to the potentail to permanant daylight, as well as failing to address the fate of the royal guard. I also failed to deliver Luna's reasons to sending everypony to Ponyville, underplayed Shadow Flare's omnicience, and didnt touch on the theme of the story, which plays a part in Sunset's importance in visiting Ponyville. So yea, one big screw up on my part. since I'm at work itll be a bit till i can address the problems with the chapter, i just wanted to say im sorry again, and when ive finished the chapter ill post another blog concerning the changes and additions to spare you from having to reread it. Sorry again...
