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Knight Breeze


Just your average gaming geek/college student. I study computer science, play pathfinder, and write stories, and have a patreon!

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  • 49 weeks
    Xlibris

    Hey, you guys ever hear of Xlibris? I've got an offer from them to publish my book, but I'm getting some shady vibes from some of the reviews I've read about them. Any thoughts?

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  • 50 weeks
    Amazon's changing it's print costs.

    So, as of June 20th, Amazon will be changing its print costs. Specifically, everything is going to be a bit more expensive. If you were on the fence for buying a physical copy of my books, now's the time to change your mind, seeing as how the price is going to increase in a couple of months. Thought I'd give you all the heads up.

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    14 comments · 316 views
  • 52 weeks
    What I Am: Aftermath chapter.

    Hey, guys, I'm writing a conclusion chapter for What I Am. Nothing too substantial, given that a sequel and spin off already exist, but I thought I'd put it down as both a way to let those that don't exactly follow me (or, at the very least, don't follow my blog) know that the second book is out, and also know that A Darkened Sky is about to get a whole lot of chapters.

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  • 52 weeks
    Fool's Gambit.

    Man, did you ever go back and just... cringe at what you did before? That happened to me with Fool's Gambit. The story has plenty of potential, that's not the problem. My problem is with how it's written. The prose is off, there are numerous errors, and I feel like the whole thing is rushed. Like, that first part could have easily been 4-5 chapters longer, and it would have been better for

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    2 comments · 236 views
  • 53 weeks
    Live on Google Play!

    Hey, guys, just wanted you to know that What I've Become and Nightmare of the Past is now live on Google Play! So, if you didn't have a kindle-compatible device before, you can buy both books for 3.99 each right now on Google Play! I'll be working to get them into more outlets during the next couple of days, so keep an eye out for them!

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Feb
27th
2015

For pete's sake... · 2:39pm Feb 27th, 2015

Well, my new story passed moderation. Just so you know, the second chapter I wrote is garbage, but apparently necessary in order for it to have enough pony, despite the fact that the fist one had freaking Amethyst Star in it.

At any rate, I pumped that sucker out in about two hours, so apologies if it isn't up to my normal standards.

Report Knight Breeze · 279 views · Story: A Hiss in the Dark ·
Comments ( 2 )

The whole "a story needs pony in it" rule to pass is a bit dumb. I'd argue stories just about Equestria Girl characters have negative amount of pony. So why can't a story have no pony in it for the first chapter or the beginning? SO long as pony does happen eventually. Again, it's a dumb rule.

2837081 Agreed. My story had Twilight Freaking Sparkle in it (granted no interaction at all between T.S. and Main character) AND the main character fought TIMBERWOLVES (the wooden ones)!!! The only thing that I could THINK of why it didn't pass is that the main character didn't interact at all yet with any ponies...

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