Jan
17th
2015
Celestia's Relaxing Vacation. Hoomyns? · 1:09am Jan 17th, 2015
So I was considering having Celestia visit the human world and off the mane6 and/or herself and/or the CMC, etc there. It would add a good number of chapters to the fic obviously, and I wonder what people would think of the addition. Or maybe she should bring them back to Equestria and kill them there? That would probably be too repetitive. Or it could be a spin-off story, though I'd rather have it all together.
YES!!!! EQUESTRIAN GIRL BLOODBATH..... now that.... that is a fetish.
I hate myself
When it comes to involving humans you could do something along the lines of: principle Celestia and princess Celestia team up.
No.
Even apart from the fact that human CMC wouldn't be allowed on this site.
Yeah, will be awesome if Celestia and Twilight(if she still alive) will apear in Canterlot High and teach hoomyns to snuff lessons. They need to learn pleasure of snuff orgy, no matter in Equestria or in EG universe. And, preferably, this will not be as spin-off.
I prefer, that Celestia and Twilight will apear in Canterlot High, kill mame6, CMC and their classmates, then bring principal Celestia and vice principal Luna to Equestria, remove their horns and wings, after that use them as broodmares. There never be too much broodmares.
How to you this idea: to add dark mirror universe too, where Evillestia take vacation from being evil?
Please, please, please, say you have a plan to back OUR Luna, not Lunas from another universes and times.
At least transform human Luna into pony.
But.......they wouldn't have their magic so.....how would they do it?
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Maybe you're right, then Twilight and Celestia need a plan to bring all of them to Equestria.
Nice idea but may be take your time and try to be more creative with your next story? CRV had decent start but turn out to be only a middle quality fap material. As you told me in your private message you do not wont to make "just another Spiky Wikey story" (as i still think my idea was a lot different) Maybe take your time think about something more complicated with characters that we - readers- will feel something for when they die not just another story of overpowered villains going from "i killed a kitty" to " i rule this world and kill everyone i wish!" in spawn of 3 short chapters. I know you work hard on every chapter of each story but you start to repeat yourself.
Now if you dont like my BRILLIANT
ideas dont read next part.
SO dont make the next story part of the CRV it will be just a repeat of the events so far with more creative ways of torture. Instead do a spin off story, for instance make the corruption of princes Celestia or Twilight work on Twilight or Celestia from human word and let one of them into insanity and evil. But make less killing in that story and add more FEELING,S make US CRY while we CLOP when our beloved character die! Dont just try making the victims suffer in more crazy ways its just getting silly after 4th time somon get cooked in they own stove (you know you always cook someone in Cakes shop? :P ). Instead do scenes like this "character X fuck character Y who is in love with X. In scenes before we have description how much Y love X and he is so happy X finally decided to shares his feeling and he wish they first night together to be very special. [blach bla bla descriptions and talks bla bla bla...] Then suddenly in middle of fucking X pulls a wire from his pocket/bag and start to strangle Y . Long description later we see Y with the last of his strength reach with his hand for X face and gently touch it and move his lips in silent " Why?" Then depends on story X can fuck his corpse violently or do something different. Ok i end in a moment just last thing. Try not to make another massive slaughterhouse, or at last make the villain be stealthy dont just announce "IM EVIL BUT POWERFUL SO I CAN KILL EVERYBODY!" after 4 chapter...
Still your fan Soul.
2728614 Well the CMC could be allowed; I'd just need to disclaimer it that they are aged up for the purposes of the story, or just keep that chapter somewhere else.
2727731 Celestia 1 would definitely try to get other Celestia 2 to join. I haven't decided if she would, but either way Celestia 1 would kill her.
2727571 It is indeed.
2730374 Well the butchering would occur in the human world, else there wouldn't be much point to using the human world. But yes, I haven't exactly decided how I'd use human Celestia and Luna in that. And Luna does... sorta come back... in a way.
2730516 Well I could do it two ways. I could either have them bring a device that gave Celestia magic, or she could just do it without as a personal challenge to herself. Maybe she could bring a few guards to help hold down victims.
2730679 Well they may only bring their corpses back.
2730910 When you've written as many stories as I have, it gets very hard to not repeat yourself. Still, I do go places in this story that I didn't go previously. And yeah, I probably could put more emotion in stuff. I hope I did better in some of the upcoming chapters.
Celestia anyway need magic catalyst, because without magic she don't be able to cast a futa spell. And Celestia going around the school with squad of guards (who wear old roman armor) looks really strange and suspiciously. Anyway magic so much cooler than those mindless AI minions.
Don't kill them so soon.
Please answer to my questions:
1. Do you decided how this will be: as sequel, as spin-off, or as part of the main story? (I vote to the part of the main story.)
2. Will Celestia visit the human world alone, or with Twilight? (Twilight will love to kill her other friends too.)
2733270 I'll probably include it in the main story just to make it more absurdly long. And both Celestia and Twilight would go there.
I'd suggest it to be a side-story, as having HiE for no other reason than the idea would be... awkward.
It's best to put such an idea away from the main one. It just wouldn't feel right.