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Knight Breeze


Just your average gaming geek/college student. I study computer science, play pathfinder, and write stories, and have a patreon!

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  • 49 weeks
    Xlibris

    Hey, you guys ever hear of Xlibris? I've got an offer from them to publish my book, but I'm getting some shady vibes from some of the reviews I've read about them. Any thoughts?

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  • 50 weeks
    Amazon's changing it's print costs.

    So, as of June 20th, Amazon will be changing its print costs. Specifically, everything is going to be a bit more expensive. If you were on the fence for buying a physical copy of my books, now's the time to change your mind, seeing as how the price is going to increase in a couple of months. Thought I'd give you all the heads up.

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    14 comments · 315 views
  • 51 weeks
    What I Am: Aftermath chapter.

    Hey, guys, I'm writing a conclusion chapter for What I Am. Nothing too substantial, given that a sequel and spin off already exist, but I thought I'd put it down as both a way to let those that don't exactly follow me (or, at the very least, don't follow my blog) know that the second book is out, and also know that A Darkened Sky is about to get a whole lot of chapters.

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  • 52 weeks
    Fool's Gambit.

    Man, did you ever go back and just... cringe at what you did before? That happened to me with Fool's Gambit. The story has plenty of potential, that's not the problem. My problem is with how it's written. The prose is off, there are numerous errors, and I feel like the whole thing is rushed. Like, that first part could have easily been 4-5 chapters longer, and it would have been better for

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  • 52 weeks
    Live on Google Play!

    Hey, guys, just wanted you to know that What I've Become and Nightmare of the Past is now live on Google Play! So, if you didn't have a kindle-compatible device before, you can buy both books for 3.99 each right now on Google Play! I'll be working to get them into more outlets during the next couple of days, so keep an eye out for them!

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Nov
4th
2014

New Chapter to Fool's Gambit. · 3:28pm Nov 4th, 2014

Well, as promised, I finally got around to updating Fool's Gambit. I know that it took me some time, and many of you are wondering "why the heck is he working on this garbage instead of Nautilus or What I've Become?"
The answer is that I cannot control my muse, and that I write these stories not for fame, but because I enjoy writing, and I really need the practice if I'm going to be designing and creating video games.
Yes, that's my goal for college. I want to design, write, and program video games. For that reason, I need to become a better author, so I need as much experience at creating narrative, characters and plot as possible.
That being said, any advice is appreciated, and I hope you continue to read my stories.
Anyway, Nautilus Protocol is up next for an update, so keep an eye out for it!:pinkiehappy:

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Comments ( 5 )

And it becomes the first story I can take off my "stories that need updates" shelf! Excellent

A video game designer? Probably a good choice. Lots of competition, but the market is never saturated. I started out as a TV repairman, and worked my way into "broadcast television engineer" before that market collapsed. I think you'll do better. Best of luck to you! :yay:

The introduction for Fool's Gambit didn't draw me in, but knowing the quality of your other stories (and waiting impatiently for updates thereof) I decided to read it anyway. It's pretty good so far, after all!

Make videogames?

1. Good luck

2. Ever heard of Extra Credits on YouTube? I would recommend them

Anyway, Nautilus Protocol is up next for an update, so keep an eye out for it!

*In my best Batman voice*
You lied to me!


Seriously though, I hope that Nautilus is still up soon for updating!

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