BLOG SPAM! SNIPPET FOR YA! · 9:15pm Jul 22nd, 2014
"We're through Luna. Just...leave me be."
"No...beloved please..."
I felt her wing trying to gently turn me around by my shoulder, but after a mere moment of consideration I shrugged it off, picked up my backpack and made my way out of Canterlot Castle.
The train journey to Ponyville took a while. It was about one in the morning when I left and around twelve o'clock the next day by the time I got there. I didn't really have much of a plan, I just wanted to keep walking and see where the road took me.
…And so I did.
I walked and walked and walked. Ponyville wasn’t enough of an attraction to stop me, and besides it was far too close to…anyway.
The road was stretched ahead of me, trees, grass and the scent of fresh air tantalizing me onwards.
Yup, just me, my backpack and a bit bag that only I could use.
The bit bag itself wasn’t something you could buy in a shop either. It was actually a mix of both my idea and…her magical ability. Thus if anyone was foolish enough to try and steal from it, they would be zapped with one ruthless mother of a tickling charm.
Although…why I’m thinking of something so mundane compared to…
The road stretched on…and I walked it. I walked it for so long, never stopping, never needing to stop in all actuality. It was something I discovered later on, but my need for food, water and sleep was far less than it was before.
And really, I knew why.
…
I cracked open my weary eyes and awoke to the scent of cinnamon.
To my dismay and pain the morning sun shined bright and right into my eyes, causing me to squint and curse out of habit. I groaned and turned away from the crack in the curtains, ignoring the squeak of a rented bed far too small for my size. When I turned however, it was only to find my nose pressing up against a curtain of silky, almost water like hair.
I blinked twice at the hair, my barely awake mind taking its time to recognize the fact of somepony being in my bed.
“The fuck?” I mumbled, reaching out and brushing the hair to one side, revealing a dark blue coat beneath. “What the…? Luna, how’d you, why are you-“
She broke up my…well, broken questions with a light snort, before yanking the already tiny covers off of me with a rather strong tug.
“Tis too early beloved,” she complained, shimmying back against me. “Let us be silent and enjoy this moment of peace, no?”
“What? No, what are you doing here?” I asked. “How did you find me?”
Luna sighed tiredly at my demanding tone, but turned around nonetheless and regarded me somewhat sadly.
“Why?” she asked, confusing me slightly.
“Why what?”
“Why don’t you know?” she asked again.
“Know what?”
I beginning to get a little irritated at her bizarre questions. And the way she was staring at me wasn’t helping either, it just made me feel…weird.
She smiled a small, sad smile and nuzzled me quickly, before moving her muzzle to my ear and whispering…
“That I’m not really here.”
“Wha-“
I stopped talking the moment I blinked…because the moment I blinked, she was gone. The space in which she had laid was unshaped, merely ruffled from my probable tossing and turning. Even the smell of cinnamon has vanished, leaving nothing but the scent of my own sweat to keep me company.
What...the...fuck?
I think I preferred the cinnamon.
What the hell? It's cool as all get out, but I feel as if I am missing something here. Something that would explain exactly what it was that I had read. Is this part of a series? If so where is it so that I may go and read it?
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It's a what-if to Luna's original chronicle. Go read it if you want to understand what's going on
Oh man, there are just to many stories to keep track of. I'm gonna go have a stroke.
At first I thought it would be the first chapter of the royal breakup chronicles RELOADED, but the end was pretty new for me. Does it contain possessive Luna, which is highly possible, and does it belong to the Breakups Stories?
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It's a what-if to Luna's chronicle.
But this one is nice, no dark shit. Just Steven with Luna on his mind...constantly and literally.
Romance/Sad/Human.
Twill be somewhat short, I'm not looking to create a ground breaker
I'm wondering why Luna smells like cinnamon. And why a hallucination would reveal itself as one.(have you been watching Perception?(do you even get that in the UK?))
im waiting for hopefully a nightmare moon breakup please do one
*still waiting for "alex or xander"*
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I think he still has to finish Resistance is Futile before he can do that story?
this is nice
now more subtle manipulations
pretty please?
maybe?...
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Love this idea, nice to see something not overtly possessive. Also, is Beyond My Wildest Dreams and the others linked to it dead? It's been a year and it's not getting any better for Immortal Lovers. :(
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She liked to eat Cinnamon buns...and the scent eventually stuck with her.
Thus the cinnamon!
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I bet he liked eating Luna's cinnamon buns.*rimshot*
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I'll have to use that...
I'm liking this, definitely a good start, although I do have one question, if possible, are you going to redo Come Back To Me?