Revisions to fics...

After finally getting a professional proofreader to take a look at my story, it has been pointed that, along with the usual missed commas and such, I have been a victim to 'Lavender Unicorn Syndrome'. I know I have. I used those modifiers on purpose and I felt like they worked well with the story.

HOWEVER...

After hearing why the story would be better off with those modifiers, I have decided (fully my choice, cuz I saw exactly what he meant xP ) to revise my main story 'You Never Know' and my side story 'It's for... Science?'. Simpler pronouns are easier to read and connect.

So, without further ado, before I release the next chapter, both fics will receive an overhaul whenever I am on the computer and have time to fix them. In my off time without access and during certain times at work, I will be writing new chapters, as I have been. Plus, I'm trying to introduce an Appleshy fic, as well as an Apple Fritter x Flitter fic. I also kind of want to write something about Celestia... maybe.
I need to finish a commission that I meant to do like, two months ago...
o _o;;;
Guess I better get started.

Comments

[VitalSpark]

I really want to read this Fritter x Flitter!!