Never War character weapons and abilities (so far)

This is the weapons and powers I have made so far for the OCs that appear in The Never War
Turbo Charger-
Weapon: Golden Axe of The Light
Weapon description: A weapon said to be forged and wielded by Celestia herself, this axe is made out of a virtually unbreakable steel.
Ability: Nightmare Shower
Jon Bucker-
Weapon- Honesty Heart
Weapon description: This weapon has the strength of a city of Earth ponies and Jon Bucker's cutie mark carved in it when he found it the first time.
Ability: Heavenly Earth
Deathwing (owned by Pinkamena Diane Pie289)
Weapon: Death Scythe
Weapon Description: A scythe that was forged out of the lava of Tartarus, and infused with the hatred of Tirek this weapon has powers and strength that even Deathwing himself has yet to discover
Ability: Hellfire
Lightning Strike (my mom's OC that she wants in the story)
Weapon: The Hurricane
Weapon description: A weapon of an unknown kind, this mysterious weapon is as much of a mystery as the mare who wields it.
Ability: Unknown
Xares-
Weapon: Dark Mace
Weapon description: Unknown
Ability: Unknown
That's as much as I have gotten so far, if any of you didn't get to read the story yet, I recommend reading the first chapter to understand what I'm doing

Comments

[Serefin]

(my mom's OC that she wants in the story)

She treats you terribly and then you go ahead and include her OC in it? Why does she even want an OC of her own in the story?!

[TurboTheGameGuy]

2261814 I have no idea why she even made an OC. But if I don't give her what she wants, I might be grounded. Besides, her OC dies in the story... painfully.

[Serefin]

2262036 Oh.

[TurboTheGameGuy]

2262040 Sorry if I sounded creepy

[Serefin]

2262046 If anything I'd say you didn't sound creepy enough. You need to add in more heavy breathing and moderately dim mood lighting.

[TurboTheGameGuy]

2262047