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Just a hobbyist writer with aspirations of making a career in it.

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  • 181 weeks
    New story is ready to go

    Hey everyone, A Clash of Magic and Steam is ready to go, hope you all enjoy it!

    2 comments · 608 views
  • 186 weeks
    Looking for a new editor (closed)

    Greetings all. While my current editors are great, time marches on for all, and one has had to bow out due to other matters eating his time. So I am putting this call out for someone with some skill at both proofing and pre-reading/brainstorming to fill in for him.

    Discord is a must. (Not the character).

    PM me if you’re interested.

    5 comments · 439 views
  • 189 weeks
    Update on next work

    Since I have been a bit quiet, I figured all of you should get an update. I am working on a new fic, as I mentioned somewhere before... i’m going to be pre-writing several chapters and then posting them on a weekly basis once they are all complete.

    Once those start, I will be returning to work on Beyond Equestria, and try to wrap that up.

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    5 comments · 787 views
  • 239 weeks
    MotH Chapter might have been a bit early

    So after some consideration from comments and my "pain in the ass" editor*, I have decided to unpublish the latest chapter and write a new one to happen before it.


    *his words not mine.

    11 comments · 906 views
  • 330 weeks
    Last hive book

    I suppose I should have done this weeks ago, but for those of you who missed it the final hive book is started here. Mother of the hives

    11 comments · 1,144 views
Jun
27th
2014

Malkavian Queenbow · 9:48pm Jun 27th, 2014

Those of you who follow my cover artist will probably remember this pic in their feed, but I feel that it should be up here a well.



Not so sure about all the hooks, but its a solid piece all the same. Sing your praises below.

Also, it seems that an individual or two have issue with my usage of the word "Malkavian". Its my personal POV that if there is 1 person saying they're in the negative, there's probably 100 more who think the same way, but are quiet about it. Originally I assumed that the context of the sentence or paragraph the word was found in would be sufficient for anyone to glean its meaning, but that was probably a mistake. So I might as well put it here. And not in APA format because i'm a rebel.

Malkavian: crazy or crazed with varying levels of dark intent.

In the context that i use it in, if an expression (smile, scowl, etc.) is Malkavian then it is a temporary state, if the person is directly described as being Malkavian, (Polybia is quite the Malkavian.) it would be a more permanent state of being for the individual. (depending on context)

I also use it because i loved the http://vtmb.wikia.com/wiki/Malkavian vampire clan.


See you all next chapter!

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Comments ( 15 )

Honestly, if I'd had to guess this creature's gender, I'd said it's male without any doubt. Kinda has that Gandalf-like amiable look too, not Malkavian in any way.

Oh well, fine art is fine. Never really understood it :derpytongue2:

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Yeah i second this comment. Gave me some gender confusion, is there even any provision for a changeling 'king'?

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The artist was under the inclination to make RD male for some reason.

isn't malkavian a race of vampire from the World of Darkness tabletop rpg?

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That makes more sense. coz i was just imagining a blue and rainbow version of that queen Twilight cover art.

Regarding the use of malkavian, I would recommend against it. Far more people will be unfamiliar with the source material than familiar with it, and are likely to assume it's simply a misspelling and misuse of machiavellian.

It's not like you really need to use a word from WoD to express "crazy or crazed with varying levels of dark intent" as a concept, just pick an appropriate synonym for crazy that gets the general idea across.

I can see RD looking kinda of like that and about the use of the word malkavian, I was among the group that understood what you meant. I am with those who say to use it sparingly to keep the flames low.

I have no fucking idea what this is, but now I am going to have nightmares. AND I PLAY SLENDER FOR FUN!!!! Seriously, worst art ever. I like the older stuff, but this is awful.

Comment posted by Tulip deleted Jun 28th, 2014

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Yar mome...

2240643 My mom is missing an eye, thank you very much.

Ill agree with the too many hooks thing and I think it feels a bit too masculine.

2241397 Who cares if a biologically female pony looks male?

Comment posted by nospeedy deleted Mar 9th, 2015

So is this what Rainbow Dash and her children would mostly look like?

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