Edited "Shades of Night" Transformation Scene · 9:25pm May 6th, 2014
I enlisted the help of my good friend danail24 to be my editor for "Shades of Night". He recently edited the transformation scene at the end of chapter one, and it's a hundred times better, so give that a look.
Yep, I like this description better.
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