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hamcon


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  • 347 weeks
    The story that will never come.

    Back in 2015, I began to write a First Person Chrysalis story where she gives birth to a Changeling filly, but her drones died giving her and the foal their last bit of love, so she would journey across Equestria to give her foal to Fluttershy, to make sure the changelings survive. It was called "With This Last Breath, I Give To You" and it was going to be an Adventure/Tragedy one-shot.

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  • 349 weeks
    My Main Problem When It Comes To Writing Stories

    There is a method for writing a story where before you write it, you make a draft that shows the characters, plot, tone, and how the story will go.

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  • 354 weeks
    So, for those who read Queen of Cloudsdale

    I am going to start over from scratch, I am not happy with it, Rainbow was out of character and it was going to fast. As such I will start over, but While I will start writing, I am not deleting the old version until I know I can delete it and submit the new version. If I can not delete it, I will delete the chapters and put in the new ones.

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  • 449 weeks
    Something that I want to do.

    For some time now, I want to make a comedy where Twilight friends think that Twilight will be immortal so they keep making parties for her so they can spend as much time with her.

    I want to make it since I am tired of people thinking that Twilight is immortal, when the creator of the show even said that Twilight was not immortal.

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  • 453 weeks
    The worst thing happened while playing Destiny

    I was doing a strike with one other guy, as he and I were the only ones that got on, when we got to the two bosses that we had to kill. He kept dieting while I revived him, and we managed to kill the first guy. Then came the second guy, he only had a sliver of health left, only a couple more shots would have killed him. Than out of nowhere, the screebln goes black, and I get a message saying

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May
5th
2014

In need of an editor for Spike's New Life! · 8:56am May 5th, 2014

Since Spike's New Life came out (God I need to think of a better one), I noticed that the most common complait is that of my grammer. Now I know this already, and since I can't trust Word or Google docs to know all my mistakes. (Word doesn't like Canadian spelling, and docs doesn't think my own name exists) I am deciding to get an editor. Now I did send it to the group "Looking for Editors" but I am hopping that this blog will help even more.

Now some heads up, I am horrible with comma splicing (I never know when to use a semi-colon, even though it was explained to me in both school, the internet, and other people). My ways of describing things are short; since I am not the best in the area. Also, I am not the best at switching words, like using "said" instead of words like "spoke", "yelled", "whispered", etc.

My times of writing are very weird, as I have two accounts on DA for my other stuff I write. Also their will be times I procrasenate for far to long, I am horrible at this, and I hope I will find a way to stop it. Any suggestions will help.

I hope that you guys will consider helping me out, I want the story to be better, but I can't do it on my own.

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I can help with editing the story. I like the story so far.

2078935 Okay any experiances? (tell me in the notes please)

Comment posted by Deus Umbra deleted May 5th, 2014

2078952 Yes, I do have past experiences. I have helped other FIMfiction writers edit their stories, and I am also writing my own story here. English is my main language, so I can help you with any grammar mistakes.

2078958 Well than, I am going to give you the the first chapter to edit, do you want me to email it to you, or do you want to go straight into google docs?

2078962 Email would be fine.

2078963 Okay, just send me your email in notes, and I will get right to it.

If you need additional help, drop me a line. I'm often around.

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