The Empire Strikes Back! · 7:41pm Apr 18th, 2014
Or in this case, the Everfree.
New chapter is up! Hope it was worth the wait. I forewarned it's more dark nature in my last post, but with my editor freshly traumatized, I perhaps need to make another warning here.
It's a little creepy, and you may feel some despair. It's purely for tension building I assure you. Happy endings will be had by all. I mean it when I use this particular movie as an example. It's a light-hearted comedy action film, but that second one, if left on its own, would be very, very dark.
Know that The Return of the Jedi awaits around the corner,. There'll be less e-woks, but still many cheerful adorable and fuzzy creatures hanging around.
Let me know your thoughts!
PS: Awesome art friends are awesome!
Snails' writing ability:
See if you can make it out better than Spike could!
Glad you posted, or I would not have known. It's not showing as updated in my tracker. It never does for this story for some reason.
15k?! Well going to have to clear some time.
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And yet, my shortest chapter since chapter 5.
It's hardly THAT dark... through the seed theif thing WAS creepy
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I didn't think so either, but Frazzled thought I might be going grimdark after reading. Not sure if that's a testament to my skill or a testament to my lack thereof.
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Or the pre-reader doesn't know what grimdark is.
He forgot Twilight's horn.
2022068 No one died yet, you're still good! It's not like you fucked up a pegasus wings and dropped him from a few hundred feet in the air. Man, I gotta update The Balance...