TThe Child In Me
MLP: FiM
Dark
Comedy
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A young man wakes up in Equestria as a very adorable Alicorn colt, gets forcibly adopted by Luna, and tries to find his way home.
Alt. Universe
Human
Twilight
Celestia
Luna
Fleur de Lis
Cadance
Zamairiac · 26k words · 2,113 147 · 43k views

The Child In Me- Lunamom Vs Cadancemom · 2:03pm Apr 7th, 2014

Given that the chapters are so small, a small snippet is all I'm going to give XD

Snippet

I shimmied around in the pouch so as to get a good look at her.

She, like Mom, was an alicorn. But rather than the dark coat Mom had, she had a light pink one.

Her mane was a multitude of bright colors, most of which gave me a headache. The emblem on her flank was a teal heart made of what looked like crystal, which also appeared to be held within a gold lance. And finally, her wings seemed to have a sort of magenta hue towards their tips, which was in my opinion quite nice to look at.

What was even nicer though, was the adoring smile she had adorning her muzzle. Her eyes were purple, bright and sparkling as they looked at me.

I liked it, it made me feel warm and fuzzy.

Unfortunately, I was brought out of my trance by two snorts of hot air tickling my hair. Looking up, I...well, saw the reason why.

Mom was glaring daggers at the pink alicorn. Her wings were raised and ruffling in a...really weird way, something that my instincts seemed to recognize somewhat.

She was displaying her dominance...why. because of me?

Then, to my surprise, the pink alicorn raised her wings as well, ruffling them ever so slightly as she gave Mom a really, really scary looking smile.

I'm pretty sure If looks could kill, the both of them would already be buried six feet under.

Cya later!

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