A Bothersome Factor of Learning Better Writing.

Alright, first to the point. The fourth chapter is made, crafted and pulished to the point I have no idea what else to do for it. It's just one button away to be out and I'm right now with issues to pushing the button which I'm about to proclaim.

Not really but... actually this is for later.

So what happened is that I have been taking English lessons. Those that know me should be familiar with English is not my first language,(Yes, that bad writing there was intentional), hell it's not even my third, the good thing here is that I have been taking English lessons of college level and it should effectivly improve my face slamming against keyboard writing by two. The bad thing here is that when you re-read your previous work you see things... ugh, Christ.

Don't get me wrong, story wise; idea wise, it's fairly clear. But the grammar, the comma usage, the punctuation. The statement. The confused wordings and the style of description now bother me to no end.

So I'm going to make a polishing; a cleaning of all of which irk me of the previous chapters. Since this chapter I feel is the most interesting of them four since it gives the decisive tone the story will subjectively follow — at least plot wise since when it comes to situations it's all made out on the dot based on characterization that I follow like a humming bird to a flower — but in the end to note here is: The fourth is done, the previous three bother me, and I don't feel clean to post this after the previous without doing some spring-cleaning, so here I ask. Which you believe better?

Decisions, decisions!

Post the fourth chapter and work out the other three and make them sparkling and then as I do I work on the fifth chapter? Or I don't post it and I force myself to fix the three previous before doing anything. This can help me to assure fourth is beautiful-darkish-goodness, and I have a three well escalated chapters to build it nice and cozy. Comment to help me decide, or I shall eventually.

Oh, and another thing. I have found these lessons so great that I believe that sharing them is a must, so I will be starting a series of Blogs that will show grammar, style in description and all that good stuff. Until the point I know nothing else of course. But that's not the matter. The matter is that I will do it for “the lol's” and for nothing else.

See ya around, and thanks for reading.

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[Narlepoax III]

I actually have a habit of reading my old stories and editing them, as I go along.