A reading of a chapter in my dungeon · 7:16am Dec 8th, 2013
Yes, I have the next chapter of my only story in my dungeon. But I have reasons!
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What? You want an exple-- Oh, right this is a blog.
Alright, the chapter is ready, but I am not, and what does that mean to you? Well, pretty much nothing, but read on! This chapter looks way to big, seventeen dot six actually (17.6k), and I feel that everything should remain, but I have no one to bounce off this criteria, or even a proofreader for that matter.
So what I thought is whoever reads this blogs actually cares for what I got to say or is bored out of his, her, in-between or nothing, mind or minds. So I am asking whoever can read this, for their opinion. Just comment here saying that you can read a 17k piece chapter and say it sucks so I can give you said link and ask you if it actually sucks.
But the definitive question if the above is not of your liking is if such a massive chapter is alright to cut in half? But because of the nature of the chapter, which is like my first chapter, it feels as if stopped it will break its flow, it will feel rough and completely out it.
So what do you think? No? Yes? Maybe?
And if you are not into that and into reading a Headcanon of Equestria Conspiracy and/or Headcanon of Ponies: naive, racist and ignorant, press each respective link to have a look to a post I made about the subject.
Thanks for reading.
If you can't find anyone else I'll offer my time for you, I can certainly read 17k words and then tell you it sucks
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I will be sending it by PM now. Thank you.
But I don't know if I should feel happy or worried.
Oh what the hell, I'll go with happy.