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"You'll wait here and be grateful that I find no cause for you to have an accident creature," she said, sneering.
I didn't know if it was instinct or a mixture of my newfound magic or...or something else.
Enjoy and as always, do let me know what you think!
Finally, fucking finally!
I've finally managed to find the time to re-read the entire story up until The Abandoned chapter.
As such I now have both the information, feel and motivation to continue the epic tale of Richard and Chrissy.
Here's a small sneak-preview -
"What in the hell is going on here?" I asked, eyes wide as I took in the frankly terrible sight.
Yet Another Story For Those Interested To Enjoy!
This time between a temperamental young man and a feisty Goblin who become friends with benefits and try to keep it that way.
Emphasis on try 
After a few comments, I suddenly found Chase's character a bit lacking in why he is how he is.
So I'ma do a prologue, a backstory and shove it before the two chapters :)
Look out for it, should be done in 1-2 days tops.
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Oopsie.
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Worth it, I don't like half arsed stories, especially when they're my own
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Agreed, I did have trouble getting into Chase's character. This is what happens when u want to write one-shots, things come off half assed.(you don't have it in you so stop trying.)
Go ahead if you feel this is needed, but I disagree. More backstory would just muddy the waters and make this needlessly complex. Chase is an arrogant kid with an over-sized martyr complex. The why of it really isn't that important. And if you think it is important, why not put it in chapter 3's dialogue instead of adding an entire prologue?
Isn't that something you want the readers to find out along the way? Not just straight up tell them? I mean, I'm one to talk, but generally character discovery is kind of a thing.
Well I found that fic to be refreshing. A welcome change from all the kartikcargomovers.com/images/shipping-service3.jpg
Hmmm though I can see why some people might say Chase's character is a bit lacking, think of most books you read, you jump in having no idea who these people are and you learn about them on the way. I personally thought it was fine and had no need of a prologue. This is only my opinion and know that this is your story and if you feel it needs a prologue, it will get a prologue. Just do what you feel like ya need to do.
Btw I love the story so far, keep up the good work.
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Well, I have been contemplating on carefully putting a few more bits of himself in the third chapter instead...but I'm not so sure.
This sucks