The joy of editing.

So I submitted, as one does, 'The Devil's Details' to The Royal Guard and Equestria Daily. While it didn't reach the standards expected of either one, both still gave me some pretty substantial and decent feedback on what could be done to improve it.

So as of this blog post, the next chapter might take a little longer than usual to appear (given that my average time interval between new chapters could be measured as appreciable fractions of a glacial aeon, I can only imagine your shock). Current chapters will be getting a fair amount of tweaking, trimming, and in some cases, burning-to-the-ground-and-rebuilding-on-the-ashes. Hopefully, a better story will come out of the experience.

So all my paragraphs are apparently starting with 'so', apparently. That also appears to be happening.