Jan
18th
2014
Back to writing :) · 6:49am Jan 18th, 2014
Like it says, I am back to writing again on My Very Little Ponies, got a lot of things with the main plot worked out and ready. Also, so you all know, this is one place Twilight will get to visit. When that happens, prepare for adorkableness.
That being said, I still need a chapter focusing primarily on Applejack. Like I've said, Pinkie and Rarity are good, I did something for them, Rainbow has gotten two chapters where she is the main pony, so that's it for her being the main one for now, Fluttershy I got something planned, but I still got nothing for the lovely Applejack :( .
Please give me an idea. Anypony please give me an idea for Applejack.
1730364 Yeah.... Dang it why is it so hard to think up stuff for her?
Hm... Maybe Micah gets overworked like Applejack was during the Applebuck season episode and she helps him out or something?
Dang it. I want to do something with Applejack!
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I blame the setting, it's got too much city in it. The only other thing I could think of is maybe a park with a picnic, but that could just as easily be a group activity.
Maybe Micah starts having family troubles for some god-knows-why reason. That's the other half of her established personality. Or you could find an orchard somewhere for them to go to, I dunno.
Sudden idea, maybe farmer's market? I'm just spouting stuff now, so don't hate me too much. It's just that poor AJ doesn't have too much to her. She's an honest, hardworking family pony.
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Guile approves.
1730383 Talking about family stuff could work. And I am not sure if Seattle has a farmers market, but I know it has Pike Place Market, where someone can find almost anything. And they do have a large produce section.
Then again, with the museum stuff I have planned they will leave Seattle, so I could think up some reason for them to leave the city for Applejack.
How about Micah brings apples, that happen to be full of pesticides, and Applejack has a speech on how normal peo- ponies grow things
Or - they watch TV these days, right? Maybe they'd see ads for an iPhone or something, and then "now that's how you sell an Apple"
But I still think Applejack compulsively bucking everything around her is the best idea I can come with
Whoa, brainstorming is hard when you have to focus on something specifically :O
How about Micah takes Applejack to a grocery store and it really makes it sink in how different things are from her home. She previously just thought that Seattle was just a big city, just that the people and things were bigger. But while going through the store (and maybe even on the way there), she sees things that truly shock her, like security cameras that monitor nearly everything, to sliding doors that are so huge, you could move an apartment building through them and apples bigger than her family's dining room table, which makes her realize how small she really is in this world. And than maybe for a tearjerker, have her see what kind of apples they're looking at, McIntosh and Granny Smith, she then asks to being taken back because she's feeling really homesick. I dunno, what do you think?
1730742 Yeah, it is. And while I could do that, I want to think of something that can have comedy, while also having a good conversation between the human and pony, like the stuff with Rarity, Pinkie, and Rainbow Dash did.
1730891 Hm... That could actually be alright, thanks
No idea, but they have to watch Star Trek II: The Wrath of Kahn.
1743947 Oh, now that would be interesting.
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This is why I thought of it. I've wanted to see how they would react.
1744019 Ah yes, that scene. I think that would be very interesting for them to react to.